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"...Within Us"
  by Disoriented_Diva...(Lushus)
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Come through me by One


Paradise - Sade

Place Me In Your Arms...Warming
Me Like A Morning's Cup of Coffee
Airless Laughter...Refreshing Like the Dew Upon Thirsty Leaves...
Let Me..Kiss You...Cheeks...Caressed by Soft Love of Velvety Flowers
Its Morning Let Our Love Overflow and Shine Through the Openness of
Where Emotions Lay at home, at peace

Lay Your Head in My Lap...Where my hands can design the motions of
How we compare...Passion with entranced hand through connected waves...of conversation...eyes mirroring reflections...serenity carries us in the rhythm of
Life...

Take My Hand...As We Walk in Rosy Paradise...Our...So[u]les...Walking the same Lush Path of our
Secret Garden...Utopia Awaits Us...

But First...My Love...Let us Wake Up...Side by Side...
and Within Us...this Moonlit Love.

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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2008 (02:08 PM)
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  Unethical
08/18/08 (03:57 AM) 
lmao at the great fort excusing someone..very nice drop mamma..again mushy as all get out..but a good look on ya when the fuckittude dosent kick in :)

  Sum-Thyng Like...
08/17/08 (04:34 PM) 
beautiful simplely beautiful

  ...Da RiDdLeR ...
08/14/08 (02:57 PM) 
ha yeah the lovey dovey mushiness .. ahh you had a weak point.. it ok i'll excuse you LMAO !!

  mindigoblue
08/14/08 (02:50 PM) 
Awww....this is really romantic. I love the images of midnight moonlit garden and flower petals cast by this. Very nice...

  One
08/14/08 (02:10 PM) 
Beautiful lady...simply marvelous...and...mushy as fuck...lmao...lol...imma pardon u this time....lol

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