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"What The Seed Objectifies"
  by Guey2


It Never Entered My Mind - Miles Davis Quintet


Shall i reach beyond my pedestal and all that
it bequeaths
Display abdication in request of
humility

Shall i give obscurity my desolate
embrace
& sip idly the embittered waters
of non-fruition's lake

Shall i make counterfeit my sincere
yearnings
And focus complacently on
modesty's unfurling

i ask in what existence
does this capacity lie
For even a seed clings greedily
to the soil its has conquered for
nourishments supply

It bears no blame for when it was
a seed the same terrain restricted its
movement
shall we cast a discerning eye upon it
for simply gripping what its pedestal objectifies
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Date Submitted: Jun 12, 2008 (08:02 PM)
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  E. Curt
10/18/08 (06:05 AM) 
I had to read this twice very nice write. The music in the back actually put the reader in another place. Keep up the work. E. Curt

  lady innocent
09/19/08 (09:53 PM) 
WOW POWERFUL WITH A TOUCH OF BEAUTY YOU REALLY GOT SOME TALENT KEEP IT COMMING

  WarmNillaSuga
08/24/08 (03:23 PM) 
I had to read t his more than once...but I find yet another deep scribe here...u comtemplate thoughts of life interactions and pen them so nicely...*sighs* you conjure up some meaningful though processes in your readers...well...at least ME! Another good one...

  XPERIENCE
08/21/08 (04:56 AM) 
first off i love this song!!! the wordplay in this joint made it that much more enjoyable.. lyrically awesome... i love how this joint ended.. "It bears no blame for when it was a seed the same terrain restricted its movement shall we cast a discerning eye upon it for simply gripping what its pedestal objectifies" NICE!

  Ms. Intellectu...
08/03/08 (02:24 AM) 
Wow poweful is simply what this magnifies... its a masterpiece

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