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"Welcome to the Edge"
  by Luvlee


Welcome to the edge
Where falling off is a requirement
There really aren’t any rules
Except your sanity must go
You must do what your mind says without thought or reason
You mustn’t ever be disobedient
Welcome to the edge
You’ll have no friends here
Don’t worry because no one here cares
Your life means nothing
Oblivion is what you strive for
Acceptance is a thought of the past
Silent disillusionment is all you have now
Welcome to the edge
Where turning back is not an option
Going forward into the pit
Is all your capable of
Falling is all you’re able to do
Rock bottom is your refuge
Welcome to the edge
Where the evil one toucheth you
Where there is no escape from your sinful rendezvous
Welcome to the edge
Where flesh is burned away
Where fire, hot coals, and brimstone rain everyday
Welcome to the edge
The place your flesh walked you
Because you refused
Jesus
Welcome to the edge
You’re eternal Damnation
The Lake of Fire
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Date Submitted: Oct 21, 2008 (11:17 AM)
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  Untouched_Soul
10/31/08 (03:52 PM) 
damn you left me speechless with this one!

  AR-15
10/30/08 (12:24 AM) 
Damn that is very very deep... left me without words for a few minutes...... An incredible piece of poetry you have written and a new favorite of mine

  Dimplez
10/28/08 (02:47 PM) 
DAYUM!!! This left me speechless...must admit i've been on the edge before and it aint no joke, i love spiritual pieces and yours had a very deep message, i hope more would read this and realize the consequences of refusing Jesus. Excellent piece, def a fav!

  OGSoldier4God
10/24/08 (02:48 PM) 
I Just Love The Way You Wrote This Write And I Can See The Spirituality In Every Line! Thank You For Sharing This ONe With The World! It Really Is Interesting About The Refusing Of Jesus And I HAve Experienced Some Things That Have MAde Jesus Followers Refuse Me So I Gave To Those Christians That Which They GAve Me! HELL!

  Jdawg
10/24/08 (10:55 AM) 
this is a great write, very different, but thats what makes it a great write. keep it up.

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