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"Welcome To The Darkside"
  by ASW
  - This Poem is a response to the poem A Bad Girl's Pleasures by Chocolatezeus


Welcome to the darkside

DAMN
You sure take care of you baby
I defy you on purpose
Wanted to be treated like a whore
Not a lady
Not some delicate hothouse flower
Fuck me and suck me
Lick me and kick me
Hour after hour after hour

MMMMM
So good when you knocked me down
Even better when you dragged me around
Made me crawl
Bringing out my inner bitch
Shoved that chocolate stick
Down my throat to relieve the itch
Gagging, retching almost made me sick
Resounding echoes of
“Be a good bitch and suck my motherfucking dick”

OHHHHHH
Like a Tiffany necklace I proudly wear that leather belt
Its cinched tightness the best thing I ever felt
Sink your teeth into me as you sink into my pussy
Commanding and demanding
grabbing my hips pulling me back
pulling the belt tighter taking up the slack
I know afterwards my pussy will be all swollen
Like a black eye that barely survived the back door attack

YESSSSSSSSS
You are the best daddy
I love it when you punish me for behaving badly
For blatantly disobeying
Knowing good and goddamn well
You were serious I act as if your are playing

SHIT
Beat me and eat me
Choke me and stroke me
Use me and abuse me
Lick me hungrily and whip me softly
Daddy, I love it when you give in to your nipple fetish
Makes sure my pussy stays the wettest
It has ever been
Step up on step right on in
Welcome to the dark side

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Date Submitted: Aug 04, 2008 (10:27 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/04/08 (10:41 PM)
Author: Chocolatezeus
Poem Title: Continued Darkness

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  JustChuck
09/24/08 (02:12 AM) 
Talk about knowing what you want and how your want it. This is the extreme example. All the imagery was alluring and pulse quickening to say the least.

  Juicy1on1
08/09/08 (01:24 PM) 
Definitely a view into the darkside but truth is sometimes we do like it rough. Nice piece.

  touchdapearl2
08/05/08 (01:05 AM) 
goddamn and thats a clinched teeth goddamn,im scared of you,lol

  Chocolatezeus
08/04/08 (10:31 PM) 
Now this is heated and makes me horny as hell. Like the fire your breathed into this one ASW. come over here so I cna do this to you

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