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"We Blend Together(Lyrical Divas Challenge)"
  by ButterflyDream


We blend together love with pain
intertwine these two emotions deep within our veins
In this world where things constantly change yet redundantly remain the same
And the lingerings remain long after the feelings have faded
Without the perfect blend then our hearts would be left jaded

We blend together laughter with sorrow
in times of bleakness reminiscent smiles we borrow
letting them be our umbrella untill the storm clears
bringing in the shining sun of tomorrow

We blend together calmness with anger
to keep us from crossing the line into impulsive danger
Even still at times we are so strongly seized by emotions ,casting the reflection of a stranger

Many times life causes our emotions to run deep
seemingly without a foreseeable end
We dilute the potency by the mixture of feelings that we blend
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Date Submitted: Nov 20, 2008 (03:03 AM)
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  Raw Sensuality...
12/28/08 (04:46 AM) 
wow... your choice of words never ceases to amaze me lady... I love this piece...

  GRIM REAPER
12/14/08 (10:35 AM) 
THIS PIECE WAS VERY WELL WRITEN AND I LIKE THE WAY U LEFT OFF WITH THIS LINE We dilute the potency by the mixture of feelings that we blend GREAT WRITE

  11th Wonduh
12/12/08 (01:24 AM) 
there's always a ying & a yang effect. i truly can relate w/ the opening stanza. pearls of wisdom throughout

  Lique
12/05/08 (07:54 PM) 
this poem is one of those that come around every once n awhile that basically bring to light things that go on but that we just don't think about...you wrote this brilliantly and so beautifully...i appreciate how you did it...great write

  DaddysGirl
12/02/08 (03:41 PM) 
So true... there has to be a balance. We wouldn't appreciate the sun without the rain or the ups without the downs. You did a wonderful job scribing this piece. The concept is creative & relateable. Nicely done!

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