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"wanting a baby"
  by baby wiggles


I want a child of my own
Im tired of taking care of other peoples kids
And i dont have none of my own
I love the feeling that a kid needs you
Everyday my heart starts to hurt more i want a kid so bad
Everyday i want a kid more and more
My heart is yearning for one
I dont know what to do
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 (03:05 AM)
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  1truelady
08/22/08 (06:07 PM) 
I feel your passion in wanting a child, and me being 22 I dont have any. That doesnt mean that you cant lay the foundation to have one of your own. Good read ma keep up the work!

  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
08/22/08 (01:08 AM) 
i agree with everyone else..the passion is there..but don't rush it queen..it will be when it's time...and you will be a great mother...just focus on all that you will teach your kid's...how they will be"men" or "queen's"..and so on..u kno?...nice piece tho..i enjoyed it very much.

  Bonita Nena
08/22/08 (12:51 AM) 
SH0RT BUT Y0U G0T WHAT Y0U WANTED 0UT WHERE WE CAN READ iT..i KN0W THE FEELiNG..BUT WATCHiN 0THERPE0LES KiDS MAKE ME FEEL LiKE THEY MiNE,,Y0U KN0W?...MY LiL BR0THER...i CALL HiM MiNE CUZ i RAiSED HiM LiKE HE WAS...i KN0W THE RESP0NSiBiLiTiES T0 A CHiLD BUT iM KN0W THAT i NEED THEM WHEN i GET 0LDER BECAUSE Y0U MAY N0T WANNA BE D0iNG WHAT Y0U WANT WHEN THERES A CHiLD iN Y0U LiFE AT THE PRESENT...THAT AiNT A BAD THiNG BUT Y0U WANT T0 D0 SUHUM Y0U ALWAYS WANTED T0..iT'LL BE KiNDA HARD KN0WiNG THAT Y...
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  najah
08/22/08 (12:51 AM) 
nice little poem although it was short it was fill with passion.

  Ticole
08/21/08 (03:18 AM) 
Yea I feel you on that on dat one forreal! I got a GodSon in which I love 2 death but I could neva take the place of his mother.....maybe one day......

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