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"Ur First Time"
  by J Mello


from the top of head, till i get underneath your toes
see-through lace, your face illuminated as if your body's not exposed
i could treat it in a way as if you werent wearing any clothes
but i rather undress you to let the romance gather as passion grows
whats going to happen is in your head but its only a guess
sliding two fingers down the inside groove of your back through your dress
ever so gently my only current motive is to impress
you untill i get the slightest offer to help you undress
with a slight breath u whisper out a soft moaning voice
if i should continue to more delicate places is your choice
give me a simple message nod or guesture
but nonetheless your going to continue to feel pleasure
cotton has such a soft texture and rubbed gently across the skin
sends shivers up and down your back and mixed feelings within
impossible to pretend your emotions are genuine
wanting to answer the question are we lovers or friends
all you gotta do is say yes and ill continue
go as far as you feel comfortable i love you but dont have to be in you
its all your decision your hormones might get the best of you tonight
it probably has something to do with the sensual ambience with dimmed lights
that make you wanna try something new and make me the one
be the first to be intimate with you perhaps the only one
laying on your back scared with anxiety
tensions forming between us spreading throughout your body
frightened to death as it is your first time with this experience
looking up into my eyes so concerned and serious...
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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (01:14 AM)
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  Rubay-Xo
07/23/08 (08:39 AM) 
im loving thiis thb

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