GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Forum
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow simpoet's PREVIOUS POEM simpoet's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"UNTITLED WAR"
  by simpoet


(atl cath shrine, MLK & central, atl; 04/25/08,0808)

I just pretend that i'm at war
with my men
not my men
at the front lines
away from a distant home of lost
found memories that come in a smuggled
creased letter each month
every other while missled thistles
scratch my exposed and wounded flesh . . .

darkened by birth
blackened by the dry
blood of my dead friend, yesterday

I buried him deep
deep so I wouldn't have to hear
his voice, see him well up his eyes
smile through tears of joy in his last
moment of prayer
his arms reaching for God

It's time to go to the next grid
lids riddled with the bullets of age
rage, sweet and sour mud from
a different shore

I tire, but
I know there's a higher power involved
who solved my problem yesterday
before I joined my friend -----

I don't mind death now
I've just forgotten how life was
when i was young
less trained for the duty I
not face

my face
filled with the occasional
haunting smile

the picture and tag
still to be sent to
anyone that cares
along with

words

the gate's been closed
and locked for an
hour now

the hot sun, the flies
start to arrive to
feast upon the
past as

my buddy lies
at my feet

my guts
floating in the
nearby stream

as lovely as
it was
yesterday.

(c) 2008, simpoet
© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Jun 03, 2008 (12:57 PM)
search icon
Viewed: 19 times
user icon
Rating: Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 (0 Points)
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 0 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
 
key Log In to rate this poem or add it to your favorites.
 



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (0)

No comments yet. Be the first!!

key Log In to rate or comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow simpoet's PREVIOUS POEM simpoet's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy