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"Unknown"
  by KaySoul


Why do I have to compromise?
My heart not wanting this tangle
But my mind tells me to compromise
My back to the one I love
While i stare into the eyes of the one I'm with
As my heart remains in this tag
My mind still tells me to compromise
My soul bleeding for acceptance
My eyes crying out for your warmth
But yet my mind tells me to compromise
As if my mindpower is strong enough
To overbear my heart beating for you
And though this may not be so
My mind continues to remind me to compromise
My now is on its way to destroy my future
One that was designed with your name printed on it
A future that has the light of you
But once again my mind tells me to compromise
A burdened soul, a broken heart
And now my knees remain weak
But this does not stop, cause my mind shouts for me to compromise
My eyes burining from the fire of this pain
My feet aching from the journey I've been

I compromise, and I lose a piece of me...

A piece of me that can be yours
A piece of me that you deserve to have
A piece of me that is inscibed to you

But yet I hear the sound of my mind playing to a rhythm,
That won't stop reminiding me to compromise

So im left here with questions of which answers are Unknown!
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Date Submitted: Aug 01, 2008 (10:29 AM)
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  Don Lui
08/17/08 (08:06 AM) 
I will give you advice which you should never forget Ask the lord for Guidance and thats ur safest bet If u follow ur heart in ur mind u'll never forget but if u follow ur mind in ur heart u might regret ... beautiful piece

  DAKING!
08/01/08 (11:16 AM) 
I digg your mataphors and creative word play. In this piece sounds like you did something you regret. What ever it is you need to straighting it up in not let it linger. Good work!!!

  Gifted Pen
08/01/08 (11:16 AM) 
been down this road too many times. i love the spoken word flow. loved the subject and the way you presented it. this was logical but drew out an emotional response. great work.

  Soultalk
08/01/08 (11:14 AM) 
Very nice, this is a great portrayal of the intensity of emotions. Well done.

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