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"Uncharted"
  by Ezdozit



A random day at a random time
A guilty pleasure captives the mind
Energy is high adrenaline is banging
A crowded sea in unison is singing
Something stands out and out glows all else
A spirit soft yet strong that made its presence felt
Intrigued I engaged without provocation
Surprisingly there is quick acceptation to the invitation
A dance is dances both stunning and unique
Much is said with very little speech
The flow of information muddies the waters
A blinding light leads to a place uncharted
Risk versus reward is an instant factor
Time and space suddenly begin to matter
Questions beg for unwanted answers
Thoughts fly around in a cautious wind
Landing on waves every now and then
Strange aura arises making everything cold
Turning joy to darkness as things unfold
Oddly no problem presents it’s self in these parts
But then again this place has yet to have its start
The map of these woods is yet to be drawn
Uncharted is this path but not forever more
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Date Submitted: Jun 04, 2008 (06:32 PM)
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  RedLoveSong
08/07/08 (10:18 AM) 
Great execution! I think risk versus reward is an instant factor is my favorite line in this piece.

  Jody
07/24/08 (07:33 PM) 
I'm feeling the thought of venturing down the "uncharted" good or bad only time will tell right. Last line prob my fav

  John0323
07/24/08 (09:56 AM) 
"Risk vs reward is an instant factor" mann if i cant relate to that..very few want to travel the uncharted land because of the risks it involves..i really feel this poem. nicely written, definite fav. for me

  babygur
07/22/08 (12:51 PM) 
VERY VERY EMOITIONAL AND TOUCHING...IT FELT AS THOUGH IT WAS COMING FROM THE HEART..10STARZ

  Damami2burs4ev...
07/17/08 (03:25 PM) 
U allow the reader to creat there own meaning behind the piece. This is what great story tellers do. WOW...Impressed

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