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"U da picture.....I just paint it"
A LoVeSaYiN_YeS and Disoriented Diva Collaboration


  NatMcD:

"To acquire love.....fill yourself up with it until you become a magnet"
-Charles Harnel

Can't you invision our love lasting forever
No doubts, no preconserved notions of us being toghether
Stereotypical type of man, I'll have a to say those similarites
werre turned into differences in advance
I know what they known to do but they've neva fell in love wit you
Analzye...Artist, Beautiful, and yung.....just my type
I'm not tryna rush but i think that your resume would make a perfect wife
I kno my actions & words sumtimes contradict my desires
But if i went full throttle your heart wold be on fire they call me da "I'm so in love wit u" man
Cuz honestly Lushus i can have you eating out da palm of my hand
So baby watcha think about dat?

  Disoriented Diva:

"Love is strong yet delicate.
It can be broken.
To truly love is to understand this.
To be in love is to respect this."
- Stephen Packer -

Palm of your hand, nah love i want you wrapped around my finger
So that way we can always be together
Because unlike those other girls, I can love you better
Still i watch you as you analyze everything you do is no surprise
Maybe because you're stereotypical
So for me to trust you there has to be a miracle
I been hurt so many time before, and my fears i can't let go
But still i am feelin you, there's just something about you
I see a possible future in us, it just depends not on what you say but what you do.
For me to really love you...

  NatMcD:

"Undoubtedly to some, the idea of giving so much love to self will seem very cold, hard and unmerciful. Still this matter may be seen in a different light, when we find that 'looking out for Number one," as directed by the infinite, is really looing out for Number two and is indeed the only way to permanently benefit Number two."
-Prentice Mulford

I groom myself for your likes and dislikes
I'm tryna figure out if your tryna fight just to fight
Or your tryna to test my patience and my desire fa you
I've been hell and back just to be wit you
I'm not perfect and i neva will but i can give you the over exaggerated love appeal
One that no one can deny and you can see this love wit da untrained eye
I'm feeling you like you feeling me but that's not my goal...it's fa you to fall in love wit me
I'm not tryna to lead you i want to fiend you...i wanta taste
your my favorite escape from life i dunno but your essenses raised me from wrong to right
so just bless me with this only night

  Disoriented Diva:

"When you love someone,
all your saved-up wishes start coming out."
- Elizabeth Bowen -

I can't understand, i am in awe how you meet my every demand
I been fighting because i can't stop myself from more than liking you
Yes i know you been through hell and back, now i am willing to fly to cloud nine with you
You have proved to me everything, i see is just right
Have i found that Mr.Right, i think i have and he's in you
Despite my madness you stayed true
And by my side i want you to stay
Because i let you go and you came back my way
And every wish, you have made it come true
I been wantin to say this, and i'm no longer afraid, like dwele "i think i love you"
So tonight is alright but i think i want this for the rest of my life.

  NatMcD:

"Love is but the discovery of ourselves in others, and the delight in the recognition."
-Alexander Smith

Realizing how much i love u
that statement makes me know for sure i love u
they say if he doesn't blink when he says it it must be true
I won't think twice about sending da rest of my life wit you
Your muh betta half in every way
you pick da date and that'll be our special day
wateva for muh love she'll have
giving me hope that our love will last
baby bless me wit your beautiful words
speak to me as if i only have limited time to hear your words

  Disoriented Diva:

"Love is a moment that lasts forever..."
- Julie Wittey -

As i stared in your eyes, and you told me those words i been aching to hear
My heart agreed, and i know for sure i want you here for the rest of our years
No longer about me but about us
Always stayed with me despite my fuss
I noticed for real now as you not once blinked, that i love you so much
So we shall share our live permanently on 777
Because this match was made heaven
With no fears or inhibitions
I have surpassed my trials and tribulations
You are the feeling in my ever sensation
For the rest of my days, Our love will be a forever lasting perfection.
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Date Submitted: Jun 30, 2007 (02:31 PM)
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  XPERIENCE
08/29/08 (10:50 PM) 
this beautifully written.. the quotes truly added to this piece.... u two flow so well together...nat i loved that first quote and diva i love that last quote... im with fort..how did i miss this! love is indeed powerful... and is beautiful..lmao at forts magnet..i gotta recharge mine i guess... its broken! lmfao

  Jamillah
07/22/08 (12:28 AM) 
i love the quotations kickin this off... and then you two fuel each others thoughts.. and responses... just a dope collab.. i can see why the many comments... lately i've been thinkin to myself... when i'm rightly centered MYSELF, that's when i'll draw Mr. Right unto me... nicely done, you two...

  UNDEFiNEDBEAUT...
06/25/08 (10:58 AM) 
WOW DIS COLLABO WAS EXCELLENT, YALL DID YALL THING ON DIS, LOVED HOW U HAD THE POET QUOTES IN THE POEM, GIVIN THEM PROPS... I GIVE THE BOTH OF U 10 STARZ FOR THIS WONDERFUL PIECE.... KEEP EM COMING

  UNDEFiNEDBEAUT...
06/25/08 (10:57 AM) 
WOW DIS COLLABO WAS EXCELLENT, YALL DID YALL THING ON DIS, LOVED HOW U HAD THE POET QUOTES IN THE POEM, GIVIN THEM PROPS... I GIVE THE BOTH OF U 10 STARZ FOR THIS WONDERFUL PIECE.... KEEP EM COMING

  ...Da RiDdLeR ...
06/03/08 (03:42 PM) 
wowumm how did i miss this... a damn shame but i digress what makes this so holisticially strong is you two each quoted a true poet... i mean this brought this to a whole different plain of deepness and understanding....loves a powerful thing... damn it how i turn this magnet down a bit LMAO...peace

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