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"turtle love"
  by Jody



Patience 4


turtle love
hearts beat
symphonies
sometimes concordance
missed
violin strings ripped
inharmonious tunes
beats no love
waiting
for your love
to belt like an opera singers lungs
the acoustic sounds
will resound
like la la la la la
when met
in harmony
no turtle shell can be found
just two lines
crossed
in love

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Date Submitted: Nov 20, 2008 (02:45 AM)
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  Jamillah
11/25/08 (06:25 PM) 
..sounds scary.. sad. But... lol.. that's love. Traipsin out on that limb.. by yourself.. not sure if the other is out on that limb with you.. or will stay there. I'm likin the shell thing.. acoustic.. havent made all the ends meet in my mind.. but its in there..

  Angel
11/24/08 (03:25 PM) 
This whole concept is great to me. In love, we're all so ansy about that feeling and those perks that come along with being in love that we rushh things, but just taking it slow... allowing a love worth having to gravitate to you on its own... well, now... that's too much like right... lol Great poem.

  TARRIE
11/22/08 (05:23 PM) 
AWWWWWW, me likey this poem....too cute!:)

  Ulises
11/21/08 (07:01 PM) 
Creative piece,well put together

  iva
11/21/08 (02:26 PM) 
really nice write jody

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