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"Truly Independent"
A Dimplez and Mz_Ndependent Collaboration


  Dimplez:

Independence...
what makes me different
from your average Mary Jane
I got my own, like Neyo said
live by the rules of my own game
I don't want for anything
because wanting is for lames
I handle all of my needs
first they always came
once ur with an independent woman
your life will never be the same
I'm not the dependent type
so you better remember the name...

  Mz_Ndependent:

You see i spit like fire
and my love burns like flames
Any broad can go in yo pocket
but only independent ones
can get they names changed
I rep my city and throw up my set
but the only ones i fuck wit gotta be the best
because when your truly independent
yu dnt gotta tlk because its all in your rep...
I make my own money and buy ma own cloths
i cant denpend on anyone
because dependents get left without
a penny to lean on
and when its all said and done they're truly the dumb ones
a

  Dimplez:

who end up addicted to what he has
but don't they know that
his money ain't guaranteed to last
and his shoulder won't always be there
men may like a needy woman
but they don't love them
Independent women
will always be placed above them
Yeah, I got my own
shit's her when I'm ready to spend it
there's nothing like a woman
who's truly independent

  Mz_Ndependent:

So when he breaks down and leave your ass
think about how you didnt have anything in the past
which is still you present and your future
Come on now we got to be strong
and we got to handle our on
becuase depending on a man is where we all go wrong
So if you want to talk money
get your own please
becasue when your man leaves you
so will his money
Being truly independent is about having your own
and being strong when others think your weak....
Hell all independent women tell em
You aint never met a chick like me!!!
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Date Submitted: Nov 15, 2008 (03:36 PM)
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  AR-15
11/15/08 (05:52 PM) 
the value of an independent woman.. A great collab.. both of yall with great verses.. Another one for the Kingpins.. ten from me

  MR. BYRD
11/15/08 (04:35 PM) 
yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yep... ya'll are I.N.D.E.P.E.N.D.E.N.T do you know what that means lol...naw that's hot from the both of ya......much respect...10 from b-y

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