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"Tray [&&] Krys =)"
A cotton candy and BlakkStarr Collaboration


  cotton candy:

dont tell me forever if yuu cant promise tamorro
bcusz a heart isz something yuu cant just borrow

when i said i want him and i luhvd him i ment it
i thought he luhvd me bakk but now itsz all gamesz and shit

if yuu want he wanted me asz much asz i wanted him he shuda let me kno
but he played gamesz like im juss another ho

thatsz not wuht i wanted ta be
i wanted him ta be mine but i guess he juss couldnt see

i cry and cry
my luhv hasz left me ta die...

i need help ta find wuht wasz taken
luhving him wasz a mistake i had maken

  BlakkStarr:

dont feel alone
its happens to tha best of us
i fell hard
noone came to pick me up
and she confirmed
my deepest darkest fears
of bein alone
and now im drownin in my own tears
i styll think of all tha years
i spent givin my all
rose to tha occasion
only to fall
i love her
and i hate to be lonely
but now that i am
tha spotlights on me
so how bout u be here
and ill be tha same song
so if your heads gets heavy
heres a shoulder to lay on

  cotton candy:

lifesz a bitch but luhv makesz it worse
thingsz happen and tha BEST uf are juss under a curse

itsz okae ta be sad and sometimesz alone
and thank yuu but if yuu want someone ta cry with im on tha other end uf tha fone

falling in luhv wasz never a plan
all i asked him wasz ta be my man

it hurtsz ta kno someone yuu luhv so much can brake yuu so easy
maybe one dae i can smile again and all big and cheesy =)

dont laugh at me cutie, laugh with me...

  BlakkStarr:

you derserve to be happy
and never feel no pain
gotta learn from tha heartbreak
or its all in vain
and one day youll smile
like tha kool aid guy
we wont reconize you
cuz youll be feelin to high
off love
and all tha joy it brings
tha type that marvin gaye
and luther use to sing
and if u need me call
1-800-IGOTYOU
never hesitate baby
theres no reason you got to

  cotton candy:

itsz only a dream ta have a man asz kind asz yuu talkin wit me
bcusz bein happy wasz somethin i thoughsz id never be =(

well Mr Luhvr looksz like yuu proved me wrong
thisz is z gud high and i aint even touch a bong:P

yer a man only a fool wud hurt
most girlsz wud only want yuu ta put yer hand uo their skirt

but not me i aint like most girlsz i can luhv
and i can put yuu higher above

with luhv yuu are first
and i promise no heartsz will burst

bcusz thisz isz wuht i truely want and need
bcusz like yuu said luhv shudnt make yuu bleed

  BlakkStarr:

but styll im bleedin love
my blood is technocolor
cuz this this loves shines brighter
than id get from another
i swear everytime i fall
i get lost in it
but i never quit tha race
i follow thro to tha finish
so take my hand
ill take you to a better place
you never have to frown
ill always keep a smile on ya face
and this is all real
no deception in these eyes
so trust me baby
you got me like B5

  cotton candy:

im sorry that yuu feel sad
yuu bein hurt crushesz me and it makesz me mad

i wanna help yuu and i wanna luhv yuu
i want yuu ta fall bakk and kno that im here ta catch yuu

itsz okae baby i wont hurt yuu in any way
all i want yuu ta promise me isz that yuu promise ta stay
and i kno we will be okae

i need yer help and yuu need mine
tagther we will be juss fine

tha thought uf me holdin yer handsz and kissin yer lipsz
and swayin me bakk in for by my hipsz

putsz a smile on my face
and like yuu told me letsz run away to a better place


Tray and Krys that soundsz gud =)



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Date Submitted: Aug 08, 2008 (01:46 AM)
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10/18/08 (05:34 PM) 
how the hell this got 87 vies...favored by 4 and no comments???? wow...this was beautiful...the only issue i have with it isz tha xtru added miszpellingsz...i mean i know yall younger ppl like to write like that cuz yall think its cute or whatever...but it really does take away from the feeling of the write cuz instead of basking in the poetic essence of this joint..i find myself trying to figure out what certain words are...other than that yall collabed beautifully...both parts complimented eac...
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