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"Too Young and too inexperienced"
  by Pete Alma


Too young and too inexperienced

Not claimn’ to be all that
But all that ain’t call for
your body is adored but you mind is too weak
You're too frail
like a bed with one rail unable to sustain the weight of
A body bouncing up and
D
O
W
N
I’m not trying to clown
but I’ve been round
and cut more hearts than a game of spade
Put shorties to rest like slaves in the shade
but you’re too young and too inexperienced
Yes, I’ve read all of your pieces
about how your kitty makes men moan
But baby girl, I’m grown
Too strong and definitely too long
for you be wishin’ for this bone
So take your hidden valley back to the salad bar
And stop sendin’ all those “will you read my new writes”
Yeah, but it’s all the same
about how it’s tight,
it’s right
You can do it all night
Yeah, right
Go to school and get a
Dic
Tion
Ary
and build your vocabulary
Learn each word from A to Z
And by then you may be older,
Plus wise enough to know
that right now you sound like an
H to the Iz O
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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2008 (10:32 PM)
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  Luvlee
10/17/08 (12:32 PM) 
LMBO wOwza i figured from the title it would be a piece on this tOpic you really put it into perspective and the ones that think this is about them cannot even be mad because they set themselves up for failure...hmm maybe one day they'll realize that using whats between your legs dont make you grown...excellent write!<3Luv

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09/16/08 (03:13 PM) 
lOl-SO TAKE YOUR HiDDEN VAllEY BAq TO THE SAlAD BAR!-lMAO-WOW! YEH THiS ONE iS MY FAV. OVER All OF THEM-iliKE THAT!-lOl MAJOR KUDOS

  LiquidFire
09/13/08 (10:17 AM) 
Lmao!! PETE!! U a fooooooool!!! Oh man this got me rollin n my son lookin at me crazy!!! Wow, I am too thru wit u!!! Go to school n get a dic-tion-ary! Ahahahahahahahaha oh man the whole poem is a fave! Tell em like it is!!

  JuztBe
08/25/08 (04:53 PM) 
"I’m not trying to clown but I’ve been round and cut more hearts than a game of spade Put shorties to rest like slaves in the shade but you’re too young and too inexperienced Yes, I’ve read all of your pieces about how your kitty makes men moan But baby girl, I’m grown " wow all i can say is wow i digz this one heavy!! im sittin at my desk with my hand over my mouth like no he didnt!! loved the way u endd this one yet another fave for me

  terrenababii
08/23/08 (08:39 PM) 
"yes, i've read all of your pieces about how your kitty makes men moan but baby girl, i'm grown" love that part. i see wat yur sayin about young girls tryna say this and that about wat they can do, and wat they will wanna, watever do. lol and i agree. most times its a little too much, and they're tryna be something they're not. just tryna get a lil attention, thinkin they cant be themselves, love themselves or watever. low self-esteem maybe? im young, 15, and maybe sometimes i might say things t...
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