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"To the "L" in my life (tru_Loyalty Group project)"
  by WarmNillaSuga


watchin u breath is like watching sunrise and sunset
happy memories turning bitter like vinegar
remembering our last embrace like catching butterflies in a net
tangible pains given to me for being the sinner

allowing ur presence to evelope me
twisiting words falling captive to your lies
your life to intertwine...no longer me i shall be
only to sleep and feel heartbroken when i open my eyes

But my heart pounds like gavel to the bench
more deceit and half truths...leave their stench
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2008 (09:14 PM)
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  big josh
01/02/09 (07:58 PM) 
dis was very good I really enjoyed reading it, 10s ma much luv

  StraY12
12/05/08 (06:57 PM) 
This was nice, and I ain't just sayin' that...there's somethin' bout this when you say...."remembering our last embrace like catching butterflies in a nets/tangible pains given to me for being the sinner" that's just beautiful! I'm feelin' this one! keep writing!

  WIZ
12/03/08 (01:08 PM) 
feeling this totally! hot scribbing!

  Almond Eyes -(...
12/01/08 (12:35 PM) 
very imactful, this poem could mean so many different things. I love the layers.

  B3yond R3d3mpt...
11/27/08 (10:23 AM) 
Damn would like to hear this delivered n a soul cast...deep n lovin da wordplay we realli needa find common ground 2 collab

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