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"To Love in Wait…."
  by *F1* BROWN
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ...Patience.... by *Miss Toya*


Having your scent linger
Brings forth a memory of love unmatched

You have my senses on overdrive
At its highest peek
thus, I am more aware of your soul

You have given my inner being a new way
To see
To hear
To breathe
And to live

Your love has created a better human in me
A Creature of love
Every time you leave

I don’t see the clouds grey
But in a mere darker shade of blue

The songs I hear
All remind me of your heart

Every time I breathe
I take in the last kiss of your lips

And the life I live
Will have meaning because

You will return to me

One day

I am waiting
For you

And only you

…In love


The Closer I Get To You - Roberta Flack and Donnie Hathaway -

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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (02:55 PM)
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  Shaboogie
11/20/08 (10:46 AM) 
this is a very beautifully scribed piece chula. I am loving the backdrop and the song compliments ur words very well. keep it coming mamas. 10 stars wish i coudl give ya more.

  Candice STone
11/20/08 (10:43 AM) 
THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD POEM WRITE HERE ...DON'T DROP THAT PEN

  chantel
11/20/08 (10:41 AM) 
i love ur writing!all of them

  Prophetic Envy
11/20/08 (09:33 AM) 
Vry quiet but heart felt piece. Almost as if the person is saying it to themselves as they fall to sleep. When a lovers dream begins. Good write.

  Juicy1on1
11/20/08 (06:27 AM) 
THIS WAS SMIPLY BEAUTIFUL AND IT CAPTURED ME FROM THE VERY FIRST LINE. A FAV.

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