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"thought u cared"
  by princessjw


~tHoUgHt~
i thought you was the one for me you seemed so down in real
i thought you was the one i could tell how i feel
you said you stay true in treat a girl well but when i got to know you my heart in world turned into hell... you beat me with your words not only did you lie you made me seem as if i wanted to break down in die i never had that thought until you came around i wish i would have listened to the ones who where around they told me "yes he will beat you down"...
he beat me wit his words had me on the ground i was prayin to the lord "i hope you come around" my feeling where hurt not only where they stepped on i had a black ring around my eye wonderin why?? i never did nothin but bow down in try i showed him i cared in this was in return he said he loved me in that he cared but he showed wat he was about in it was a broken heart and a world that would never be the same... but yet i thought
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Date Submitted: Jul 08, 2008 (08:43 PM)
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  TwiZted
09/16/08 (12:47 AM) 
yo this 1 is hott 4 real...i dig this 1.. 10+++stars mama keep writin!

  Jonathan Robin...
08/27/08 (12:37 AM) 
love is that diamond in the rough and often you dig through dirt and scounding through places that are not even destinations of where it could be. Hold on to that diamond...if you wait a little while longer, you'll see it comes with other treasures as well. Great job!!

  KiNg-Go0B3r
08/21/08 (12:10 AM) 
i likes this great scribe to be ya first

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