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"This is the truth........"
  by Change by faith
  - This Poem is a response to the poem What Is Truth? by D.O.X.




lifes gettin harder every second of the day
its always about how much money that u make
rich people get it like its peice of cake
but me, my lifes at stake
i think its time to take
take whats rightfully mine
got no job so i type some lines
hopin one day that i will bein tien my ties
i could say i got a new job but it be a bunch of lies
momma im trying, plz love dont hate
im really just trying to hold my own wieght
believe one day im gonna reach my fate
let me out of this state
our troops dont get the credit they deserve
we all just kick them to the curve
they put they're lives at stake in the army reserve
do we not have any nerve?
day and night, war is what they go through
just so me and you can be free to
guns stick to them like glue
they go days with out food
we should all be respectin
but in return we keep neglectin
and still our troops keep protectin
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (06:31 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/20/08 (08:40 PM)
Author: D.O.X.
Poem Title: How's this for truth?

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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Debbie
09/09/08 (12:11 PM) 
good write.. I like ti a lot..MAY GOD BLESS U

  *Miss Toya*
08/25/08 (01:29 PM) 
this was a real write.."got no job so i type some lines hopin one day that i will bein tien my ties i could say i got a new job but it be a bunch of lies" i know some people who won't admit that....

  Misscrazilady
08/22/08 (12:05 PM) 
ARMY HOOOAH! I'm a military Brat & my folks have been to war so i feel ya. Great write.

  Artemis
08/20/08 (11:27 PM) 
dedicate this to my uncle over sea.... and my 3 homies thats on they way there....love yall.

  --->ROXIE<---
08/20/08 (08:58 PM) 
I KNOW A LOT OF PPL THAT WILL APPRECIATE THIS

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