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"Think About It: Part 2"
  by Hank
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Think About It by Hank


(You know I’ve been reading a lot of poems lately from women who say that they got all these problems from all these different dudes! They whine and cry about, who hurt them, and who did this, and who did that! But see hear I’ma set the muthafuckin’ record straight ONCE and for all!! Anyone who knows me knows I always speak from a man’s P.O.V. (Point Of View) and this ain’t no different! Some of my female friends on this site may not like me after this, but fuck it…This shit needs to be said!!!...AND YOU WOMEN NEED TO HEAR IT!!!!!!)

Another heart is broken…
And another female cries…
Over some loser that wasn’t shit…
And was tellin’ her lies…

“Oh, my life is over!!” she weeps…
As her heart slowly dies…
Tried to warn you baby…
But he was the fuckin’ shit in your eyes!!!

You see my sympathy runs low…
From little to damn near none…
Cause you weren’t lookin’ for love…
You just wanted to have “fun”!!

Cryin’ all night
“Boo-hoo, boo-hoo!!!”
“We never had a chance!!”
Somebody dial 911!!!
Tell em’ to send the WAAAAHMBULANCE!!!!!!!!!

You knew he wasn’t shit when you met him!
Now you bitch about the things he do!
Well you chose to FUCK his grimey ass!!
SO WHAT’S THAT SAY ABOUT YOU?!!!

See, now you pissed…
But don’t get mad at me…
And don’t blame his ass…
For the flaws YOU could always see…

You see women aren’t stupid…
No, not in the least!!
They know when they see a good man...
Or if he’s just a beast!!

Yeah, there are a few that can fool you…
I’ll admit they get under the radar…
But for the most part this isn’t true…
They know he’s crazy and what his issues are…

Wearing cut off jeans and t-shirts…
Lookin like a slut!
Then get mad when I call you one?!
Bitch, cover yo ass up!!!

Fuckin’ this nigga
That nigga
Saying, “Men do it too!!”
You ain’t no fuckin’ MAN!!!
Why you wanna do the things we do?!

Play the games we play?
Say the things we say?
But when I call you a ho…
“Oh, I’m a strong woman today!!” (Whatever!)

You see women want the privileges of a man…
Like the “big baller” on the street…
But when it’s time to face the consequences of a man…
THEY ASSESS CAN’T TAKE THE HEAT!!!

You see, most women are full of shit…
They don’t know what they hell they want…
Or what they’re lookin’ for in a man…
Most just want a baller to flaunt…

Oooh, did I pinch a nerve?
Did I fuckin offend?
Most of you already have a good man!!
But he’s the one you just like as your “FRIEND!!!!!!!!!”

What? Did I piss you off?
Is this write a little too long?
Go ahead “respond” back…
And tell me that I’m wrong!!!

(Only the real can feel me on this one! If you’re a woman who takes accountability for her actions then you can feel me on this! I’m not talking about anyone in particular, but in general terms! But, shit, the guilty speak for themselves! So if you feel the need to respond you just gave your self away! LOL!!! I never said any names, and like I said, if you’re a real woman you can take this in stride!....1luv G.S.!!)

Copyright, 2008 all rights reserved by Henry E. Bullard, III
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Date Submitted: Aug 11, 2008 (02:29 PM)
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  Dawn
12/06/08 (08:42 AM) 
I love it Hank, another morning pleasure..where are you coming from with all the fire? Or have I just been overlooking your work....I'm insane about this poem..cuz it's the truth...I believe God gave woman a special gift like intuition...we can feel and sense things from a mile away and ignore them..why I don't know..I'm not going to picture myself as perfect..but I've let some get under the radar..and when I did call him out and let his ass go..it only made me a stronger woman...so again I give...
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  Lique
11/29/08 (05:16 PM) 
you, luv, are a blessing...everyone needs to hear the other side of the fence every so often...and if you can't handle it...WHY????? I appreciate you for writing these pieces...so many women need to step up and realize that their as powerful as y'all real men see us...but you can't be powerful if you refuse to grow...oh and you can't grow unless you're willing to adhere to truth...

  Watduhhfuc
09/09/08 (02:32 AM) 
wow love it.. and unnfortunetly its very tru been in the situation crying for a good man when he was right infront of my face but i kept kickin it with someone i knew would never change..atleast u keep it real women cant hate for that and if they do is because they know it tru... str8 10zz pa

  Chocolatezeus
08/19/08 (06:39 PM) 
no you didn't say WAMMMBULANCE! priceless just priceless. My hat and everything is off to you on this one. You put it right on the mark with this. To hell with those that wont and cant understand this. Hell Yeah!!!

  Sexy Krys
08/18/08 (07:00 AM) 
**Standin up clappin** imma woman, and i can FULLY understand where u comin from. sometimes i dont make all the right decisions and i end up gettin hurt n fuckin wit the wrong niggas, and i can accept that. it makes me stronger. im really feelin this write. it gives u a chance to open the eyes of some females that may not realize what exactly is goin on n aint seen tha light yet lol but this is MOS DEF a fav for me. 10 starz hank u killed it wit dis write. very well written. stay keepin it real ...
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