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"The way i feel"
  by Chocolate City


The way I feel..
Man..
Its just the way I feel..
The very thought processed through my brain..
When I think of you my heart skip a beat..
And I wonder if yours is doing the same..
I close my eyes..
And I can picture you from a far..
I lose focus on reality..
Stuck in the world of just you and me..
Wondering about the possibility..
Of me snapping back in to this world and its seemingly..
Happening without a doubt..
Holding hands and letting our souls interact..
While the bodies of which they come from relax..
I cant blink without you being on my mind..
It's like our hearts are divined..
And if you dont believe me..
Lets put The flow of my heart in rewind..
.....
.....
.....
The way I feel..
Man..
Its just the way I feel..
When im in your presence..
Attentively driven by your potion..
so good..
That everyday I wish I can relive that moment..
Every second spent with you is like heaven on earth..
If pain is love..
Then I guess in this love I will hurt..

(deep breath)
.....
.....
.....
In this love i will hurt!!
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Date Submitted: Sep 15, 2008 (03:42 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  TWANGINU
12/24/08 (02:47 AM) 
OK I FEELING YOUR SKILLS.VERY NICE WRITE HERE.VERY DEEP.THE FLOW IS HOT..KEEP DOING YOUR THING..10 STARS

  Bratt
12/24/08 (02:14 AM) 
DAMNN dats deep. you kilt this piece keep it up

  Ms. Smith
12/17/08 (10:07 PM) 
very deep emotional write...i loved the last line...so true!!! very nice write...keep the ink flowin

  Addicted2Wrdz
11/10/08 (01:49 PM) 
yo, this is fire!

  yokannah
09/22/08 (11:41 PM) 
this is sooo beautiful... u touch my heart good job keep the pen flowin.. i literary cried seriously

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