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"the problem with love pt2"
  by B.R


the trouble with love..is its misunderstood
people forget u take that bad with the good
worrying bout what they would have done not wha dey should
loves worse then a drug coming from any hood

take a hit of the shit u hooked for life
blinded by infactation...losing sight
of what's real or what's right
causing pointless arguements..n fight after fight
wondering will we still be together tonight
get thru the cloudy times..to make it to the bright

the problem with love..is theirs no problem at all
people are the problem..making love take the fall
starting out fast..then soon after then fall
how walk before run..how run before crawl

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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (07:11 PM)
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  AR-15
08/23/08 (10:11 PM) 
Love the concept, bro.. A brilliant take on the content of love.. very nicely written

  L.edwards
08/20/08 (07:28 PM) 
**Write

  L.edwards
08/20/08 (07:28 PM) 
luv the right

  DOMINICANPOET
08/20/08 (07:21 PM) 
Hmm very nice response i can feel this piece no doubt.....Love an unexplainable thing.....keep em coming ten....Br baby?!

  ~* La Princesa...
08/20/08 (07:14 PM) 
okay okay i feel ya on this. loved the concept nice response B.R. babi! "loves worse then a drug coming from any hood take a hit of the shit and you hooked for life" that was a very powerful line. so many powerful stanzas. flowed perfectly from begining to end. ten and a favorite

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