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"The Perfect Girl"
  by Chocolate City


People always ask me.. What do you look for in a girl? Overused
question.. Don't ya think? I'm only 19.. I don't know what i look for in a girl.. I have not been in enough relationships to know what i can.. Or cannot put up wit.. Dating as a youngster.. Complies with components that don't apply when your an adult.. "I look for someone that's outgoing" what if shes outgoing to the point where she gets along with everyone.. And jealousy starts to come in hand.. Because i think shes talking to another man.. Just a thought on my conscious... "i want a girl that's smart" what if shes smart to the point where she think she knows everything.. And i cant tell her nothing.. Ooh.. Shes stubborn and think shes too good for me.. Just a thought on my conscious.. I want her to be this.. I want her to be that.. Ooh.. It sounds nice.. But is that really what I want.. Can I put up wit it.. I want her to be independent.. In-dependency leads to stubbornness.. Ooh.. Well she cant be stubborn.. The dis-stubborn-ed minds get easily influenced.. Ooh.. I want someone who can think for herself.. Well those who think for themselves don't need someone to tell them what to do.. I see.. Then i will start to complain because she never listens to me..I want a girl that always expresses herself.. Well.. Somethings are not meant to be said.. Ooh.. I don't want a girl that's about drama.. But what the fuck!! The expression of feelings are expressions of the mind.. Which is linked to the heart.. That flows through the veins.. Into the stomach.. Through the intestines.. Up the esophagus.. And out the mouth.. Into the air.. Which causes DRAMA!!
I'm tired of being asked.. Ty.. What do you look for in a girl..
Shit ill tell you what i look for..
When I find her!!!
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Date Submitted: Nov 11, 2008 (11:56 PM)
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  llovely
12/22/08 (11:52 PM) 
this is so true! too many times we are quick to say what we will and will not have. What we desire, and disapprove but at the same time the same things you think you want are the things you dont need. i agree with those before me. good write.

  Ms. Smith
12/13/08 (04:41 PM) 
yea that question is overrated...you said it perfect...i will tell you when i find her...you don't know what you really want until you "click" with that "one"...nice write...10 strz

  touchdapearl2
11/19/08 (11:13 PM) 
wow those first 4 lines spat really spoke volumes and the crazy part about it even as and adult you still dont know what you want in individuals because age change the wants of your desire in a partner...fiya write

  leezymleezy
11/12/08 (09:45 AM) 
lol so true.....hell i dont even kno wat to look for either...seems like once u get what u ask for, its overrated...

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