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"the Origin of the Universe"
  by Disoriented_Diva...(Lushus)
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Big Bang as an Orgasmic Theory by alastor


It Feels So Good - Sonique

Universe...Cosmologically Expanded
Black Curves Unknown and Awed By History
Philosophically Questioned Blasphemy...The World Guilty in their passionate Study

L U S T

Drawn To Primeval Atoms...
Cosmic Egg…Beginning of Galactic Nothingness

Balancing Negative Positioning Into Positive

Neutrality…Within Vast Vacuumed…Snugness
Milky…Ways…
Leaking…and Leading To…Humanity…

Modeled…Pricked Prodded
Stalked and Watched…

God Possibly Surpassed in this Magnificent Creation…
No One Really Knows…

Telescoped Tendencies…of Primordial HOT and Dense Conditions…During Infinite Times…

Electrically Inclined…Sound Waves…Static-y…Overdrive Salaciously…Stellar
Particles Breaking Symmetry…Large Opening of Holes…In Which Not Many Return

Temperatures Rise and Fall…Pressure Increases With Depth…Speeds Relativistic
During Cosmic INFLATION…Energy Remains at an All Time High

As Exploration Prods Deeper Inside
Gravitationally Traveling...Recessional Expansion…Widening…Timelessly…
Super Novae…Dark Energy…Mystery…Remains…Holmes-less

Einstein Relying on Quantum MECHANICS To…Manipulate it…As the Universe Slowly Accelerates…in its Abundance…

Breaking Barriers…and Still…Unsolved Problem…Phallus Addiction…Vaginal…Magician….
Majestically Mirrored in…Depicted Constellations

Planets Are the Creation Of…Such Out of World…Sensations…
As Many Have Traveled Far…Meeting Requirements To…Trek It…
Countries Fighting For Farthest Road…

Placing Flags and Marks…Showing Ownership Yet Not One
Can Handle It…Coordination of Systems…Not Comprehending The Factors
Of its Scale…Wishing To Glide Across the Stars…
Dreaming of Filling its Emptiness

Big Banging…Expanding Horizons…
Trotting rhythmically around Galaxies

Lights…Unknown to the Private Eye…
A Spectrum of REDshifted Light…

Morphology Scrutinized Under Satiating Perfection…
No Heat Death or Big Crunch Suffered
Simply Amazing..Curvature…Smoothing Out…Galactic Goosebumps…

With its Magnetic Monopoles…Unable To Ruin
Such A Good Thing…

Despite Hypothesis of a Big Rip…Due To Its Big Grip…
Bodacious Behemoth…Chaos…Created…

Not One Can Truly Explain it…Or Attain Its
Outermost Sphere…To its True Value…
Created as Nature Intended…Reality
Relinquished…

An Exchange of Symmetry Till…
The Highest Peak is Reached Before
Returning to
Physical Laws…Broken…
No Rules as the Ultimate Collapse of Wave
Functions Arrives…
Andromeda…Reached by the
Milky Way..

Through the Great Wall of Galaxies…
And Yet…No One Really Comprehends…
While Understanding…”This BIG BANG Theory”

Remaining glued to their…Advanced Telescope…
Voyeur Astronomy…

They Feel…The Universes Overwhelming…Energy

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Date Submitted: Aug 12, 2008 (12:25 AM)
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  Jenesis
08/16/08 (02:45 PM) 
lmao wow i'm "starstruck" lol...this was fantastic and funny at the same time...emphasizing the "big bang" theory in erotica =) lol

  mindigoblue
08/14/08 (02:46 PM) 
OMG....this is outstanding! I read Alastors piece and was duly impressed by the concept alone Needles to say I was floored by his execution. But this...I can see how many have no words to offer that seeme to truly encompass the depth of this erotic offering. Amazing, outstanding, wow...lol all pallid in comparison to what this invokes. Do your thing Lushus..

  DIE$EL
08/14/08 (12:32 AM) 
wow you took erotica to a whole new level. this is mind blowing! your metaphor is brilliant and i enjoyed this piece very much. keep it up.

  XPERIENCE
08/13/08 (04:00 AM) 
lmao at the big bang theory.. this was sexy without being overly sexy.. i could learn a thing or two LMAO.. u so dope..loved this concept.. and this song is the shit!! LOL nicely done

  Esoteric
08/12/08 (03:35 PM) 
Woa!!......this writing is on another level.....actually I'm gonna have to get my dictionary and read it again a couple more times just so I can fully understand and appreciate this piece even more.

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