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"The Heartbreak Kid"
  by A.Renee


i am the heartbreak kid
the defination of what heartache is
this shit happened again
what wrong wit me then

my crushes always turn into crashes
when he dont like me back i break glasses
i cut myself wit em and think backwards
how did i get this way!!!!!!!!!!
i'm sit back smoking my problems away
damn i gotta take to back in the day
lil nigga broke my heart and i broke his face
but that cant be the solution today
damn i cry myself to sleep
thinkin y dont anybody like me
i say fuck then im on my own
but everytime i say dat i like some cute ass boy
i would amire him for weeks, desire him for months
cant talk to him cus if he turn me down i'll be done

cus i'm the heartbreak kid

then he would go wit the bitch i aint like
the bitch i wanna to fight, she called me a dike
cus i aint a hoe like her and i love my hip hop
im jus a tomboy, and i aint gon stop
cus some bitch said it aint right, to dress how i dress
but ima martian compared to the rest
i guess thats why they dont like me
cus i aint no regular girl, thats why these hoes wanna fight me?
dont try me i'm sweet and bashful though
fuck wit me and i bash ya skull
plus i dont like u hoe, u break my heart, its dangerous
wait ima calm down, ima smoke my angel dust
im sad, so i cry and put on music to cry to
as i take i sharp ass razor and cut a line to
BLEED................
pick up a knife and come see u
so can bleed too

cus i am the heartbreak kid
the defination of what heartache is
this shit happened again
what wrong wit me then

cus i'm THE HEARTBREAK KID
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Date Submitted: Nov 13, 2008 (07:39 PM)
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  AllieK-Ya Dig?
12/25/08 (06:58 PM) 
this is hat.i love the fact that ur not really holdin back n u knoe exactly wat u feeln here...everybody's bn there and dunn that..maybe its just time to let it ride tho... stop lookin and let it kum to u.

  IndiaNicole
12/21/08 (10:39 PM) 
girl i'm feelin dis! 10starz.

  Lyricsista
12/14/08 (08:33 PM) 
awwwww darlin! i feel u! real nice write tho! i'm def feelin ya flow n style! stay blessed sis!

  ghettoholidai9...
11/29/08 (05:29 PM) 
lil nigga broke my heart and i broke his face gozzam so brutial it seem lik yo world is so violent and fa some reason im attrached ta you im degrasin i lik da flow and da wordplay i lik da lik hook you did ya thing yo ten stars and a fav

  Mz. Lyric
11/29/08 (05:03 PM) 
THIS WAS DEEP..I LOVE HOW YOUR EMOTIONS WERE JUST RAW. A HOT WRITE.

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