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"The Flower Cosmic"
  by The Aquanaut
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Viva La Poetry by The Aquanaut


flowers - Nujabes
You make me feel some kinda way....

Honestly
you
do

I chase the good feeling
that comes over me
and it always leads
back
to
you

You don't believe me
I'm running game
you heard it before
It's all the same

Truthfully
that's not the case
I never get tired
of seeing your face

Why should I lie?
That's not my style
I wrote this poem
just to make you smile

I picked the flower
the song is perfect
and if your smiling
then it was worth it

I might not see it
but still I'm grateful
you are beautiful
because I say so

I want you happy
cuz times are hard
gas prices..
Oh my God!

I read your poems
I see your heart
even the ones
I don't like are smart

This ain't written
complex and mental
because the joy
of your smile is simple

I'm your brother
and that's forever
I'm glad your moms and pops
got together

cuz they made you
and you make me
treat you
like I treat
my family


Dedicated to anyone that actually smiled while reading this : )

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Date Submitted: May 24, 2008 (02:45 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/14/08 (03:28 AM)
Author: The Aquanaut
Poem Title: Rushing Poetry

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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Jody
08/13/08 (10:09 PM) 
Love it and love how you decided to dedicate this piece. Very sweet you are... lol

  Soul Lyrikal
07/30/08 (06:37 PM) 
This made me smile from ear to ear ;0)..wonderfully touching dedication to poetry lovers!

  Beautiful Soul
06/13/08 (04:57 PM) 
This poem was pure sweetness, how i miss this one iono...i have to check to see if I still subscribe to you cuz i thought you stop writing,newayz, word...this made me smile.. ;-) seeeee

  Disoriented Di...
06/07/08 (10:05 PM) 
this was very sweet indeed...Its a nice thing to read....*smiles* Since lately times seems harsh fo real...sigh.

  Angel
06/05/08 (09:27 PM) 
This write is so calming and relaxing to me. I'll take the dedication too, because I did smile almost the whole way through. Very engaging poem.

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