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"The Death of Me..."
  by Snickaz


Your gone,
And theres nothing I can do,
All I ever had in this life,
Was you,
Made me feel,
Beautiful,
But when you left,
So did that feeling,
Greiving,
In my own way,
Torturing myself,
With these self conscious feelings,
I't sad,
How you left so mysteriously,
I thought that you would never leave,
Now i'm in a bad state of mind,
May not have cried at that last event,
But theres is still a scar in my heart,
That i cannot forget,
Theres so much emotion built up in me,
That it gets to be too much,
Your touch...those hugs,
Your love,
It's all too much,
Then another left,
I can't do this now,
How can I deal with the fact that,
I won't see you anymore,
I'm hurting,
Coping with the pain,
My veins,
Those terrible thoughts,
I'm caught,
Up between lost, confused, andalone,
My house,
Not a home,
Because you're gone,
Tears run down my eyes,
I hurt,
I grieve,
I plead,
I cry,
My eyes,
Can't seem to stay dry,
Why??????????/,
Have you taken the only joy i've ever had,
Since the heartbreaking split,
Of my mom and dad,
I just want him back,
So bad,
But I can't,
So for now,
I'll just be by myself,
Missing my granddad...

TRIBUTE TO MY POP POP CHARLES AUGUSTUS PHILLIPS AND GRANDFATHER EARL AUGUSTUS CAMPBELL...I WILL FOREVER MISS YOU...

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Date Submitted: Aug 26, 2008 (03:56 AM)
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  ~* La Princesa...
08/26/08 (06:49 PM) 
girl this made me cry.. like for real. its always hard loosing a loved when. even just thinking about it brings tears to my eyes. i know when i lost my grandpa to cancer i lost it. i give you much respect andmad props for this write keep ya head up ten stars mamaz!

  K Giggles
08/26/08 (05:38 PM) 
Wow...This was very heart wrenching, and emotional... I felt every emotion you put into this piece... It really hurts losing loved ones and in these times it seems as if there's nothing anyone can say or do to make you feel better... But on the same token i respect your art and the courage it took to write this down and let these feelings out...

  move
08/26/08 (10:00 AM) 
very heartfelt piece. touching.

  Luck-E
08/26/08 (04:39 AM) 
damn... nicely written.. i could feel the emotions... R.I.P.... i offer my condolances

  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
08/26/08 (04:32 AM) 
Dang queen...i can feel all the emotion's in this piece...my condolence's i would say he in a better place..but i know that aint what u wanna hear...all i can say is the lord's will is his...and your Fam was a amazing man 2 have lived 2 see the age he did and do all i am sure he did...he lived...now he has gotten 2 the end of the road where the real prize is ya feel me?..but losing someone close is never easy..so if u need someone 2 talk 2..or vent 2..or just need and open ear and heart...i am h...
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