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"The Dance Part II"
  by foremanlin


Rays of sunlight shift
past the pulled
shades in our room.
Bits and pieces dance in
the misty shaded glow.
As a ray pours out its
luminosity on his face,
he sleeps, he shines.
His breathing is regular
as I watch him
in his restful repose.
He stirs, and reaches for
me as he has many
times before.
Inanticipation, I slowly
brush the hair from his
brow. Realizing I'm awake
excites him, knowing
there is sweet love cumming.
His hand gently brushes past my breast,
nipples erect, knowing
there is more to cum.
Kisses, three or four
placed on my lips
before flicking his tongue
tasting of me, I open my
lips to his
urgings, feel the
warmth of his breath
on my skin as he
breathtakingly takes
my kisses from me.
Hand on my back,
steadily running down
to my other
regions, massaging.
I feel my juices begin to flow,
He slowly moves down
my body, suckling
my breasts, licking
and teasing with his
tongue as he moves
ever downward to the
hiding place.
He lightly places wet
kisses on my stomach
then blows warm air
over them, arousing
me, he finds the spot
he was aiming for
and gently licks through
the mound of dark
hair to the center
of my universe, creating
a shudder, felt through
my entire being.
Opening my lips he
places a kiss first on
my clit, tenderly licking and sucking, using
fingers until orgasm after orgasm wracks my
body.
I roll on my stomach for
him to enter.
He does so and with
a squeal from my open
mouth we begin to
dance, moving in
unison, the slo motion
love we are making
is passionate
and erotic, turning
again, he enters me with
slow, deliberate strokes
headed for a purpose as
I let out an explosive
yell to express
how good it feels
to cum again with
him insde me.
I kiss his sweat
covered body as he
moans a loud moan
"I'm Cumming!"
is all that could be
heard, as a last thrust
is felt, and warm
fluid is felt through
my entire being.
Spent, we lie in each
other's arms, breathing
in each other's essence.
Feeling the end and
beginning to our
dance.
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Date Submitted: Oct 17, 2008 (01:43 AM)
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  BlessedOne
11/29/08 (04:54 PM) 
This was truly an erotic dance. I could feel the melody and rhythm throughout the piece.

  Fresh Roughex
11/29/08 (04:56 AM) 
vividly described and i really really love this...Foramin* it's been a while

  BoySoDef
11/27/08 (05:02 PM) 
gansta write...

  Magic101
11/19/08 (12:54 AM) 
wow this iz breathtakingly hot! *whew* i enjoyed this one. very sexy piece! 10 starz

  nephilim
11/13/08 (09:23 AM) 
yea baby that is very sexy and erotic. you have me stuck in my seat great write dont let the pen stop.

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