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"The Cradle of my Comfort"
  by Harmony07


I fell in love wit u at first sight
my first thought being "mmmm.....he tastes so good."
I was immediately comfortable with you
Lying across your berth as i spilled secrets from my pen into my journal and your gentleness molded itself to my body
we became closer than close
I slept and wept on you often thru the years
and you alwayz absorbed my tears
my laughter
my....moans of ecstacy when i was brought to pleasure on top of you.
you are my best friend
calming me when i'm upset
cradling me when i need your support
allowing me to communicate my oral skills as i lay with you
speaking to everyone BUT you
There were many nights when the TV couldnt entertain
so we resorted to solitaire games
or taking in cheezy romance novels
Sometimes, the frustration would get to me
And depending on the type of frustration,
you were either a victim of a pounding...
or a witness to my masturbation
yet you received these things with no resistance
only seeking to know my most intimate secrets
and wrap me in yo warmth
you've gifted me with the most wonderful of dreams
my imagination conjuring images of my future children's conception
and my pregnancy, with you holding my belly as i sleep
And when i'm wrapped up in you,
i cant help but relax completely
But, alas, all good things must come to an end my friend
Though i'll alwayz love you from your foot to your head....
I'm sorry to have to tell you this, but.....
you shall not be my Marriage Bed.

***ShoutOutz 2 PoeticLique 4 handin me this concept n helpin me refine this piece!***
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Date Submitted: Oct 03, 2008 (02:07 AM)
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  rsenio
12/16/08 (12:36 PM) 
You gave me a totally different ending, i did not expect it to be the way it turned out to be, but still a great write non the lestt.

  StraY12
11/24/08 (06:55 PM) 
This was cute! I'm feelin' you with this one, and the concept gettin' handed to you and you allowin' to take it and work with it, is I don't even know a good mixture, "You've gifted me with most wonderful of dreams/my imagination conjuring images of my future childrens conception" that was deep right there! you got skills!

  ladystyleez86
10/30/08 (09:57 PM) 
This was good, I thought you would come with the happily ever after spin but i like how you ended it I could relate to this

  Ezzy
10/09/08 (08:17 PM) 
straight fire.

  B. Rose
10/03/08 (08:05 AM) 
Well damn yo... this was beautiful... but quite unfortunate at the end yo... all that love and affection then th relrioship between you declined yo... man such a sad thing yo... lovely piece though

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