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"[The Battle Pt. I]"
  by BellaB


THE BATTLE PT. I

I want that old thing back
Before
‘Half crazy’
Before
‘I like the way (kissing game)’
That made
The beauty spot
On nape of your neck
My
F a v o r i t e
terrain
To rest slightly parted lips
C a r e s s i n g
The stems
Of your thoughts
Delightedly
I’d nest seals of kisses
Kept looking forward
To another day
I’d get to open
A g a i n

Dam
We used to talk
Storm up a road trip through
Passionate
C o n v e r - s e n - a t i o n
The
F E E L
In our way
With words
Endures
In my limbs
Even though
I’ve refused
Its
Presence
Within my
P r e s e n t

Lately
My nights are spent
Achingly
Contemplating
Scars left
By
Combat
Keen memories
Collapsing walls
And
Barbwire strands of fiery nail lacquer
Left on walls
During ‘baby slow down…
Just take your time…
You and me gonna be here for a while…
Okay…’ sessions
Echoes piercing through the very depths
Of me
Wounding like,
Check out this fiercely
Still redolent
Hue
Adorning these walls
Smeared tracks
P r o o f
Of when
Your feet
Became agile
And
Surrendered
To succulent
M i s s i o n s

‘It used to be so dope’
Warrior-calls-gibberish-tongues-like-dope
The feeling’s got me feenin’
In this dilemma
Searching for the
R u s h
My candy rain
‘My love, do you ever…’
‘Cause I can’t leave
The battlegrounds
Desperately
C r a v i n g
To execute
Just once more
Searching for the days
Where patience was
Ammunition
A tool I wasn’t so
Forgetful
To

U s e.
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Date Submitted: Feb 22, 2008 (10:53 PM)
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  B. Rose
03/15/08 (10:18 PM) 
I like some of the song refrences you have used on this... I love this right here i love the concept its a fave

  heaviness
03/15/08 (12:23 PM) 
the circle of love stalls at the bottom -- either it gets enough energy to complete or rolls over and depletes -- you have the vision of foresight -- trusting that you have done the right thing by now -- lovely write of truth

  Disoriented Di...
02/24/08 (11:35 PM) 
YO...you are on some ish...Jeez...the way you mold a concept is ridiculous im blown away fo real!

  craziigurl
02/23/08 (07:15 PM) 
wow i like tha flow of this..i like the rhythm and the beat of each sentence and the emotions you display with it as well as the overall concept and meaning

  **HOLLA**
02/23/08 (02:09 AM) 
WTH???????? THIS WAS INSANE, THERE WAS SO MUCH CHARGED ENERGY IN THIS THAT MY HEARTBEATS RACED WITH EVERY STANZA, VERY VERRRRRRY GIFTED IN THIS I HAVE TO SAY, THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL

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