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"That'z My Love"
  by Harmony07
  - This Poem is a response to the poem That Kinda Love by ♥PoeticLique&hearts...


My Love is like no other'z love
And i'm a romantic so....
My Love is gettin over my pet peeves and pickin yo shoez up off the floor by the door
My Love is swimming inside your thoughtz, knowing the Love poemz you've yet to write
My Love is comin over just to hold me and see the sunrise in my skin as you awaken outside my fantasies
My Love is staring at me as I as I sleep tryna see inside my dreamz just to know if u reside there
My Love is sharin dat two-sided popsicle like we never wanted to as kidz....
Yea....That'z My Love
My Love is you knowing the chemical composition of my eyez because we're elementally connected
And you takin deep breaths like hyperventilation cuz i'm intoxicatin you
My Love is the butterflies in your mother'z tummy because she wants her son's future wife to like her
Cuz she can see better than I that you intend to Love me forever...
My Love is your heart searing thru my soul, burning with the adoration I feel because...you can feel it too
My Love is us creating our own song to dance at our wedding because no other can truly comprehend the connection we share...
Yea...That'z My Love
Most of all, My Love is one that reciprocates.
My Love was ordained by a Lady named Destiny and her Husband, Fate
My Love is gonna last even AFTER we reach those Pearly Gates
My Love is like Deja Vu because in past n future lifetimez we were and will alwayz remain mates
My Love is no longer being me n you but becoming we n us because unlike the Gardisil commercials we don't desire to be "one less" in our Love Equation
My Love is us finding thingz to do together that we can call 'dates' but that cost Nothing,
Because what we have is like the end of a Mastercard Ad: Priceless...
Yea....That'z My Love.

***ShoutOutz 2 Lique 4 the lesson in the Equation of love as well as the original....makin me write again. smh***
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Date Submitted: Oct 08, 2008 (02:34 AM)
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  rsenio
12/16/08 (12:33 PM) 
You rocked this write, i'm glad i chose this poem to be the frist one of yours i read, gotta go to next one now, have 10 stars for that.

  hiswife0926
11/13/08 (10:43 AM) 
Very sweet..

  ~*~QU33N~MA3~*...
10/30/08 (07:38 PM) 
awwwwwww..... got e feelin ushy ova here... that was so sweet*wiping tears* today just emotional for e gyve me a min lol... that was nyce

  DEBOMILLIONZ
10/10/08 (04:46 PM) 
awww that soo beautiful like my wife and i i loved your write

  ♥Poetic~...
10/08/08 (03:17 PM) 
ah damn... now that i get to sit here and read this iim like..... dayum! im loving the response for real "My Love is us creating our own song to dance at our wedding because no other can truly comprehend the connection we share" << loving that line. O-N-E-L-E-S-S.... i wanna be one less one less! sorry gardisil made me think of that. :-p awesome piece...... a definite fave!

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