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"That Night Part 2 During the storm"
  by Ezdozit


The floodgates are now open
The walls spasm in a steady motion
You listen to see if the rain has up at all
But soon realize this isn't the curtain call
The storm grows with my hands between your toes
I keep my position going quicker I need you to unload
That creamy center that is in ya I got to have more of the same
Letting loose holding your caboose this is no where near a game
But playing it right and on this night the rain help intensify
The amount of pleasure love this weather makes me want to stay inside
Lighting strikes a little bite makes you flinch but you dare not loosen your grip
Time for more action Thunder rolls of passion as I make your body flip
Coming to back end you let in to do more than just explore
Two spots at once that's what's up as you ask for more and more
Head never cease not in the least you know I want you to have another
Rush, clouds building so you scream out loud I treat pearl as no other
I pay attention never forgetting that double the holes need filling
I dig in while I grin you know I am more than willing
To do it up have it all with never a complaint
Moving with precision never missing like and artist with his paint
Around the rim underneath so wet and damn slippery
You know love it nothing above it take it all into me
Here come more storms with drowning moans about to be soaked
From rain cause by my brain you lay back and just float
Hold you tight see the flashing lights as storm attacks the window
Still not over clouds still moving foreshadowing more for us two
A short calm in between our storm makes me wonder what to do better
A short recess a little a rest for this isn't even The middle
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Date Submitted: Jun 04, 2008 (05:38 PM)
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  Kiwi2190
01/03/09 (05:45 PM) 
I think my fantasy of fucking in the raing just intensified...this poem took rain to a whole new level...I love this...10Starz

  RedLoveSong
08/07/08 (10:06 AM) 
Can't even stop, gotta find part 3! Loving it....10!

  mzpoetryspoet
07/22/08 (01:21 PM) 
omg...damn....u freak azz hell i c thts watsup fareal hella words usage. i love dis keep em cumn..... u kno how to get em panties wet lol. a def 10

  DJDOEGETTER
07/15/08 (11:26 AM) 
This was beautiful imagery...never has the sensual storm been better depicted! I must read part II...

  ephemeral
06/23/08 (02:35 PM) 
Well this is definitely more intense than the first one was. Not even in the middle yet huh? Whew, somebody is having a REALLY goo time!

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