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"That Gurl Sweet Honey Dip"
  by Pookiejr


That Gurl Sweet Honey Dip

I don't even no her name; shes sweet in so many ways,
the sweet taste of her nector; taste buds are amazed.
Honey is as thick as they come; smooth rich yellow skin tone,
she has the best company; she don't want to sleep alone.
Independent chick; she has a mind of her own,
rocking the finest lengerie with diamond pended stones.
Beauty is admire; it capture the eyes of the beholder,
In the winter time; you'll find her with the best fur resting on her shoulders.
Eyes will put you in a trance; lips has the glossiest glare,
your emotions will give in; from them honey hazel stare.
From head to toe; perfect shape; beautiful smile; shes complete,
month watering flavor of nector; taste so sweet.
Its hard to take it all in; my vision is holding something heavy,
If I wasn't a freak; my thoughs wouldn't be this deep.
My imagination is off the chain; my feelings can't be tamed,
Its her feminine charm that I got to blame.
Fashion type model; you can look but don't touch,
I swear the sound of her voice; you'll love so much.
Aquaries is the sign; water is the element,
just the thought between them thighs;juices feel extravagent.
So thickalicious in all the right places; conversation off the chain,
see women like her is what keeps my hormones sane. LOL!
Adorable face to some kissable feet,
the vibrations of her voice; will have your ear so weak.
The eyes usually convey remoteness and have a dreamy quality,
just the slightish touch; will set your cariousity free.
Finely chiseled features; standing about average height,
nothing don't need to be changed or adjusted; she structured just right.
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Date Submitted: Jul 20, 2008 (01:02 AM)
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  MR. BYRD
07/20/08 (03:28 PM) 
this was a great piece partna......continue to make it happen on that pen ya heard me...again, great wordplay from start to finish...B-Y

  Dreton
07/20/08 (03:07 PM) 
DUDE u got me dribbling b for real she taste da good dam i wish i could taste her but on the real this is some nice stuff i like the way how it flows hope u did have a boner writing this nice write bro 10 starz

  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/20/08 (05:26 AM) 
daaammmnnnn yo bruh this was orginally sweeet bruh no homo on that this was just the shit

  ms.mistaken
07/20/08 (04:42 AM) 
AMAZING MINDS MAKE AMAZING ART THIS IS AMAZING ART THERE FOR U HAVE AN AMAZING MIND... POINT A -Z UR ROCKED I WAS NEVER DRAFTING AWAY SO ITS A ATTETION KEEPER ALL AROUND HOT TOPIC 10 STARZZZ KEEP IT UP

  Honest Abe
07/20/08 (02:35 AM) 
Damn dude....the imagery in this one is CRAZY!! lol. But out of the whole piece one word stuck in my mind....THICKALICIOUS. WOW...and I thought I could come up with some words. Though it was tight. nuff props. And I've also had my fair share of fantasies about a honydip. If you don't believe me check out my piece called, WHAT A BROTHA NEEDS.

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