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"temptation will not allow me"
  by 11th Wonduh


inescapable webs
pleasurably
interwoven. sultry invite
provides
temptation
.
mating rituals, i'm
enticed by
as i
long to taste her
venom
.
continually we ask simultaneously
is this right?
.
temptation will not allow me
to deny
tangibility exists. needing my
curious intuitions to be
satisfied
.
fragments of my vacated essence
extended invite
essence of she, mutually attracted
w/ her intellectual artistry
as she is w/ me
.
continually we ask simultaneously
is this right?
.
temptation will not allow me
to no longer suppress these
curiosities
as i long for her to meld w/ me
as one
.
as i feel the weight of this pleasure
web shift ever so slightly
her presence, as she catwalks
down the web
.
preparation to dance & taste
her salacious venom
many would embrace the fate
as death
.
as she moves closer, emotional & passionate
curiosities, i seek to satisfy
i passionately
submit
.
temptation will not allow me
to dissuade my
intentions

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Date Submitted: Aug 13, 2008 (12:01 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/24/08 (01:53 PM)
Author: Group: Creativity Lives
Poem Title: temptation will not ...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  Soul Lyrikal
08/17/08 (02:00 PM) 
enthralling, I was stuck from the very first stanza...I enjoy works like this.

  Jody
08/13/08 (09:53 PM) 
I likes... a lot. The repetition was nice. Overall I just really enjoyed this piec.e

  TRU-IN-DEED
08/13/08 (06:39 PM) 
Damn this concept is just dope whew! The way you began the piece from the very first stanza and that along with the backdrop really drove the whole thing home for me. Totally feeling this. This is like all the right words being used at the right time. Dopeness! - T.I.D.

  touchdapearl2
08/13/08 (05:28 PM) 
uhm this was on point from beginning to the end,man temptation is a bitch,lol

  thereelest
08/13/08 (02:16 PM) 
wordsmith indeed. i like it.

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