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"Telepathy"
  by Blakfiya


Deep Space 9mm - El-P
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I arrived home
no memory on how I got there
passing faces tragic,
composed of magic,
and I had the thought
what did I do
when passing through?

and you...
were you delivered safe?
or is evil a transient being
reaching out to empty conscious
assembling armies of blank minds
in its spare time

randomly accessed, my memory
placing boots upon necks
shutting down processing units
with unseen movement
shifting rocks like druids
and I never knew it?

Surely, I stopped at a light
and saw pedestrians walking past
as I sped past plight
while I made a left, right?

I just want to know you're alright

That my autopilot zone
didn't alter your way home
or bypass any pallor cast
as I winded home half staffed
and that my 4lbs mass
isn’t a secret agent
thinking derangement

as I answer questions on how my day went

I have no recollection
but I'm sad today
and that’s quite different
from yesterday
and I wonder
...why

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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (01:47 PM)
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  African Queen
11/20/08 (12:59 AM) 
whoa this was gave my mind so much thought...a definitely one i have to take will ma...nice work & 10*s

  Jody
11/19/08 (09:35 PM) 
*sending good vibes telepathically* lmao.

  Jody
11/19/08 (09:34 PM) 
"auto piliot zone" summed this up for me. its funny how today you can be cool then the next day totally different, like wtf? that's why I used to hate change, lol, like let me just keep okay cuz it isn't fucked up... but just has one day things may feel one way tomorrow your mood might be totally different.

  One
11/19/08 (03:11 PM) 
Sheesh!!!...this one really works the brain...and to think I get accused of being cryptic at times...this is tales from the crypt...which make it a keeper...lol

  .Always.Catali...
11/19/08 (01:54 PM) 
THATS WHERE I WANT TO GO OUT TO!!!!....I want to go out and have a nice dinner in that little circular area in dudes mind back there;)....I think there were some hidden messages here....*straight face*....party at my house!...lmao!

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