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"Take ya back"
  by 'x'GhOsT'x'



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Yo...
Let me take you back..
So back..
Yo Just let me take u back..

Let me take u back when i was little
let me tell u da stories of me and what dey did to torture me
i was da poor one born in da hood,
everybody up to no good,
i tried to be good,
for a month i was good ,
shouldnt of tried,
they tried killin me ,
they thought jus cuz i was good they were tuff,
so dey went ruff,
cuffed da nigga in his face
layed him out in his place
waste of time,
this is my rhyme ye ye

Ima take ya back
So back
Just lemme take ya back
ye
So back
lemme take ya back ya dig

Now the nigga layed in his place
with blood on his face
waste of my time apreciation
everyone thought i was cool
cuz i knocked th e fool
At first i was diggin it
then they got me doin things id never do,
such as drugs and killin foos
now im in da hood for good,
they said dey kill me if i left ,
i couldnt take the fact in my mind,
so i always tried to unwind
and my way was drugs,
hangin with the thugs,
bustin slugs,
ye boy
let me take u back
ye
so back
ye
jus lemme take u back
ye
so back

Edventually i was premoted to a bigger thug n everywhere i went i busted caps
fucked hunnies like no tommorow there was no sorrow
the drugs took my pain away
they say im the king
but my old life was great
my life changed cuz of 1 fate
now im fucked for life,
not eva gonna have life,
neva sucessful in life,
always have to carry around a rife,
just cuz of 1thing i done in life..

So lemme take u back
So back
just lemme take u back
So back
fuck dat im never going back
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Date Submitted: May 31, 2008 (02:32 PM)
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  Quite
06/02/08 (01:46 AM) 
I'm feeling u dog keep doing ur thing

  La-La16
06/01/08 (11:58 PM) 
awwwww bay dis wah kinda touchin but it wah gud 10 starz skr8t up

  uhuru
06/01/08 (10:01 AM) 
consequences of ur past actions got u watching ur back I see. u live & u learn. as long as u grow from it ya dig? stay up fam. keep bringing it. 1

  doe boi
05/31/08 (09:49 PM) 
dam barh i diggs the flow and story you got going right here brah you really put this together brah on some real shyt. you got alotta emotions and feelings going on in this brah and its heard through your words

  ghostface kill...
05/31/08 (09:14 PM) 
i like alot of things, the story telling was almost of a emcees delight, ima fan of east coast rap so i could really feel it, but yo hook and shit got alittle too repitiious........none de less de story telling gives you a 9 strz frm me homie

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