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"Take Notice"
  by Blakfiya


Upon her tongue sat Agony
-boiling-
enraged by making merry on
a very slick perch, besmirched
by cracked lips and casual's kiss
deciding to climb into owns pants
-for a time-
traveling immune systems
sitting on the cusp of notice
dripping sarcasm on love's bud
refusing to budge or heal
remaining affixed as deterrent to mix
ignored, she offered him heat
now he burns
by
her 'P's

**MESSAGE**

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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (02:25 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/19/08 (02:46 PM)
Author: ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...
Poem Title: Blind Drips

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  11th Wonduh
08/23/08 (02:58 PM) 
well spoken, protect yourself, cause those reproductive assassins are out there, waiting to strike. good message

  Jody
08/20/08 (12:51 AM) 
ain't that some shit. Great message.

  B. Rose
08/19/08 (09:19 PM) 
The message was ckear as that bacground yo... well this was quite powerful even though it was kinda funny

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
08/19/08 (07:19 PM) 
What message queen. Point taken and well noted. I just love your wisdom........

  Disoriented Di...
08/19/08 (03:42 PM) 
ooooh i got it lol smh...wrap it up indeed ppl!! very very interesting nice

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