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"Tagteam"
  by Dimplez


I've been fightin this battle
alone for 20 years now
but I, on my own
can't go another round
I'm laying on the mat
ref countin me out
I'm not ready to quit
that's without doubt
so I use the last of my strength
to crawl to the edge
my opponent on my back
and tag my partner
how about that
he lifts me up
pullin me out of their grasps
he has determination
the kind that lasts
he's ready and willing
to step in for me
not wanting to see
me meet my defeat
with his aid
i'm able to overcome
those who bring me down
block the blows
they throw around
I'll win this battle
and many more to come
he's on my team and
takes shit from no one
he's my Jdeuce
he gives me my energy
with him by my side
I'm undefeated!

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Date Submitted: Nov 16, 2008 (04:38 PM)
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  JayMoore
12/06/08 (04:25 PM) 
wow dis poem was cold i like yo word play keep it comin 10*s

  RedLoveSong
11/25/08 (05:32 PM) 
This was a nice piece, great concept. It's nice to have back up to help you get through this crazy life. Jdeuce, hope you know what you got!

  jDeuce
11/20/08 (12:16 AM) 
wow baby girl i didnt know this was bout me lol . . . it is a hot write no doubt tho

  MR. BYRD
11/18/08 (10:56 PM) 
two words for folks trying to wring you down.....fuck them.....real talk, let them know that they'll make you give up or give in....keep doing your thang...say no more...10 stars

  AR-15
11/16/08 (07:52 PM) 
Nice,.. I always said you guys were good together.. and this alone shows.. Great tagteam indeed. Keep up the great writes

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