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"Swimmin Wit Sharks"
  by BL24DHxUND


I am but a small fish in this vast ocean.
Each and everyday i awake with tha same notion,
I must feed myself and most my family,
but its dangerous out there-
especially for little ol me.

I am but a small fish in this vast sea,
yet each day i must get out in order to feed.
But there are predators who lurk in tha deep,
dark, gloomy places i cant always readily see,
and to them, i'm their prey.
I'M how THEY eat!
Its tha way of tha world,
just gotta watch myself in these streets.
I am but a small fish, and
I'm swimming with sharks.
Each and everyday I'm on tha block, doin what I do,
constantly looking over my shoulder for narcs.

I cant help what I do,
as I said before- me and tha fam gotta eat to.
And so phukin what if i am in school,
thats just because my moms aint raise no damn fool.
But education right now aint gone bring me no food,
thats a long-term investment,
and we hungry right now.
Starving, so I hustle to scavage what I can,
making exchanges, drugs fa money hand ta hand,
but this is tha bait,
tha blood which attracts tha narcs,
and I am but a small fish,
to them,
tha ones we call sharks.
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Date Submitted: Sep 26, 2008 (01:14 AM)
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  misses fowetry
11/19/08 (06:06 PM) 
YAH FLOW WAS ON POINT AND I LOVED THE WAY YOU USED THE SEA AND THE STREETS SHOWING REALLY IT AINT NO DIFFERENCE HOT WRITE 10STZ THIS THE TRUTH

  Sharun
11/08/08 (03:29 PM) 
i enjoyed readin this piece real talk and i feel what you sayin, you gotta do what you gotta do to provide for the fam...Nice write keep the pen movin♥

  Snickaz
09/26/08 (11:23 PM) 
damn. this sounds like my fam rih=ght now. cept ain't nobody hustlin. but i mean it is a real struggle jus to get ur family situated. its too damn much. especially now that we have this damn crisis on our hands. who told bush to be such a fuccin dumbass that he got us into a crisis, but anyway.lol. this was a real ass poem and i cud mos def feel it. education gets u the knowledge to go job huntin, not the money to feed ur fam. so dod wat u must, stay safe, and keep on keepin on my brutha.

  mz_April
09/26/08 (05:18 PM) 
yea i know how that is gotta get the money to help the fam yep i know how that goes great write.

  Luvlee
09/26/08 (02:11 PM) 
wow this was a powerful piece that is so true man yo when i read things like this it just touches my heart because its reality, my brothers and friends and families reality and i just be like why!!! but yeah nice write! <3Luv

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