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"Sweet Preserves (Our Jam)"
  by Ms. Sincerious


Help.

I am lost in your eyes.

Somehow,
Your stare transcended time
As your gaze
Intensely
Locked on mine.

Starting to think:
I might be hypnotized.

See,
I don’t even want to look away..
I just want to stay
Here
And listen
to what your soul has to say.

I believe its speaking to me.

Reaching out to me…

Lost emotions seeking me.

As unspoken thoughts
Are emitted in your energy.

And I’m just soaking it all in…
Like mental telepathy.

We’re connected on a level
Most people never see…

The passion in your eyes
Got me warm inside.

I feel exposed to you right now
With no desire to hide…

I just wish I could pause
This moment in time…

Wish I could take a picture-
But no photo could ever capture
The real-ness
Of this…

Wish I could freeze it
So that it would never age…
But all I can do
Is re-create it on this page..

If I COULD
Preserve this moment
I’d seal it in a jar
So that THIS feeling
Is never very far…

And just in case,
This is the last time
You hold me in your stare…
Let me stay lost a moment longer…

Don’t go, anywhere.
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Date Submitted: Nov 12, 2008 (04:14 PM)
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  --->ROXIE<---
11/18/08 (11:28 PM) 
yeah the title was dope sin...lovin the wordplay...ah i feel like this now!! shut up!!! lol

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
11/17/08 (11:33 AM) 
huh??? Sin on some lovey dovey shit. Did you finally get your cat stroked?? LMAO!! naw I playin ma. TMI! TMI! I like the Preserves bit... the jar seal. Keep this moment fresh deal. Loved it.

  LyricallyDelic...
11/17/08 (10:01 AM) 
These moments would lose intensity in time had you not captured so perfectly with these lines...

  drybaggij
11/14/08 (03:34 PM) 
Now this was purty. Like that ole' "if I think bout you one more time in the day time I'mma call and cuss you out for not sitting the fuck down and stop running thru my mind" type love. Dug the play on words serving as title.

  Arcane
11/13/08 (04:11 PM) 
smh.... seems like were both caught in that moment huh?? lol.. This was beautifully done ma.. It's like you want to hold onto every emotions as you read it..

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