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"swallow me whole"
  by E~LoVe


swallow me whole




you chose to let go...

turned the lights off the show...

drapped the curtians down low.....

and i just want this to ....

swallow me whole....

leave nothing left behind.

suck the life out of my heart........and the memories from my mind.

shake out these feelings......set me free from these chains....

swallow every ounce of me....so ill never come back the same...

take away this yearning.....so...i no longer hurt....

grant me a new heart beat......that isnt in tune with hers....

take away these visions......and the taste of her lips....

swallow me whole......untill this pain no longer hits...iand isnt found in my depths..

no longer pierces....

no longer aches...

till my chest...no longer tightens.....to the sound of her name..

swallow me whole......let me come out new....

and please help me to forget.......the future i saw..in you.
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 (04:28 AM)
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  MAVRICK
10/21/08 (10:52 PM) 
daaauummmm...okay...i'm a tough dude, there must be somthing in my eye, maybe a bright light, thats causing me to tear...haha...this was sad, deep and heart felt..

  Just Me...
09/20/08 (05:54 PM) 
WOW. So sad, but that's real talk right there. Deep piece for real.

  itsnmysoul
09/18/08 (08:43 PM) 
this poem.. does alot of things for me.. it makes me sad.. but i love the idea of "swallow me whole" i gguess its because i have a vivid imagination.. i can see someone getting swallowed whole..

  Sha Bby
08/25/08 (02:53 AM) 
this is beautifully written too. yur very gifted

  sosweet
08/22/08 (11:31 AM) 
omg this is deep. this is a very good write. you get a ten acroos the board from me.

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