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"Sun...Set"
  by Beautiful Soul


The union of earth’s love brightens each day
I, the Angel on the moon have found my place on the clouds
Conforming to your needs, becoming your cushion
You rise to warm our nourished terrain

Embracing the influx of your colors
I bloom with delight
My glee sparks the heat that unfolds
Swelling the insides of my soul

I allow the tears of joy to absorb within
As we dance and sing
To the symphony of our own melody
The wind rests in envy

We kiss in honor of passion
Unbeknownst to us
Onlookers admiring our splendor
We begin to make love tenderly

Over and over again, we touch
Until the lights are dimmed
And the wind wakes
Your departure is unmistakably near

One final touch of illumination from your smile
The horizon from which you belong has betrayed me
Yet so far, twilight has appeared
“Soon my love”

And if you shall not return to me when dawn has roused
Shan’t I shed the gifted waters?
Only to beckon your warmth once more
Adoring the repetition of your wonder
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Date Submitted: Sep 03, 2008 (01:26 AM)
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  Snugasaglove (...
12/31/08 (07:01 PM) 
I agree with Tranquil Moments...This was "closed ya mouth before you draw flies" kinda beautiful! ---But, I'm so disappointed that the bg pic is gone. :-(

  BSavvy
09/28/08 (10:34 PM) 
Truly captivating, so sweet, so soft, you could feel the warmth and the love just radiating through..... Beautfiul

  Blaqmermaid
09/28/08 (11:16 AM) 
Effortless yet again. I love nature and am intrigued by the sun. The personification of this heavenly body was very well done. The last stanza is magical. The wind wakes allowed me to exhale deeply.

  Magic101
09/28/08 (09:22 AM) 
beautifully laid out. i enjoyed this one. and such a lvely background too. keep that pen hot! 10 starz

  mindigoblue
09/19/08 (11:07 PM) 
This was a wholly captivating work of beauty. It resounds with such serene contentment. The tone of the piece is utterly calming yet soul stirring in it's depiction of the perfected pairing of sun and moon. Lovely.

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