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"Sunset"
  by Jody
  - This Poem is a response to the poem blackened skies (- upon, suns' rise -) by imperfect beauTy


Goo Goo Dolls - Iris (City of Angels Soundtrack) -


The day ends
And the sun sets
Darkness engulfs the sky
And that’s when the stars begin their cries
Glimmers raining down shines
Behind hidden moonlights
Creating milky ways upon midnight skies
Darkened clouds threatening to scream, Thunder!
But the world won’t understand
En-lighten-ing them with electricity
Wouldn’t make a difference- stupidity
“Goodnight, Moon” they all went to bed
To dream up fantasies to soothe their head
Blacken skies hide sun spots
Maybe that’s why it’s easier to cry then
Sharing secrets with the wind
And allowing heavy tears to wash away the pain
Why should you see me?
When the moon has lent his shoulder
You’ve already scorched me with your rays
Burnt me and put me on display
What more do you want?
Broken pieces of me
To selfishly feast on my sanity
Vultures eaten away weaken flesh from humanity
Does everything really have to be broken?
As the sun begins to rise again
Slipping sunglasses on my face again
They won’t understand once again!
“I just want you to know who I am”
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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (03:10 AM)
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  iva
08/23/08 (02:46 PM) 
great write again dark clouds want to scream thunder but the world wont understand .that is just a perfect way of sayng thing.nicely done

  Nikkii*3
08/22/08 (05:02 AM) 
Wow.. This is a truly amzing piece right here.. I was captured at the title.. And held throughout.. Its amazing.. Well done on a beautiful write.. Got my ten.

  Searchin lyfe
08/20/08 (11:35 PM) 
hot write ma...it flowed so well

  typikal_poet
08/20/08 (11:09 PM) 
Not one word was out of place. The flow was crazy. I loved it

  Magic101
08/20/08 (02:23 AM) 
wow you put together a brilliant piece. beautifully expressed. love it! 10 starz

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