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"Summer Daze"
  by John0323


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no job, no summer camp & vacation is over
wanderin around the crib like a zombie
sittin gettin fat on the couch, dreamin of ambercrombie
excitement is like wishin on a 3-leaf clover

no effect , no change-over so you hittin the cell
ya mans in the cell so of course he aint answerin
ya home girls wit dey niggas chillin in da hotel
no home internet so you aint myspace-in

knowin that you should read-a-book or write-a-book
butchu just ate, so dat nigga-itis gotchu shook
knowin you should get-a-job or get some work done
butchu got the net back so you chattin on facebook

oodles of noodles & cereal, you cant cook a good meal
so you shoppin for a chips deal
pathetic is what you feel cause all you get is nothing done
the average day of a bored ones boredom.
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 (04:48 PM)
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  P03tIC@LLY SK!...
10/30/08 (08:38 PM) 
Lmao...funny stuff...i l.ike this...ten stars..i enjoyed reading this...keep ya pen hand strong

  G.G
08/31/08 (12:41 AM) 
Man d0nt we have days like dat. lol u keep hum0r in y0ur idk if its intentional but write 0n. i dig it.

  unique1luv
08/28/08 (08:43 PM) 
HAHAHA lovin this write pa. Very comical but serene 2 it's like a feel good type uh write ya dig... Really is a summer daze, gotta love it

  ManOfGod14
08/24/08 (02:08 PM) 
Nice write my good man. Great concept and word imagery. 10 stars

  XPERIENCE
08/23/08 (01:49 AM) 
oddles of noodles and cereal..lmao damn u took me back too!!! im with candice..life was sooo simple then!! nice drop..very funny

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