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"[Spoiled Milk]"
  by BellaB


excuse me while i drench in deception
because lately
days reek of expired milk
the dates carry on
without signs of better days to come
i hold no proof of days
good and lived

now, hol’ up
let me remind you
to remind me
how much you just didn’t give
a day
a dam
a half
a gallon
more
or
less

‘cause i forget
when the milk is gone
until it reeks
when the carton is opened
and the smell
swallows the room
in sour wave
like, hol’ up

fuck

life is good, right?
life is smellin’ like the shit, right?
life is living proof of good days lived, right?
you mean you don’t have to worry about shit, right?
you don’t have to live with rottenness in your house, right?

‘cause i forget
that life goes on
even when you have
spoiled milk
in the fridge
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Date Submitted: Sep 09, 2008 (11:58 PM)
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  MzSpoon is bac...
09/10/08 (04:40 AM) 
I hear the message loud and clear and I appreciate how you presented it. Continue to push the pen.

  B. Rose
09/10/08 (02:20 AM) 
This was an ill metaphor... nicely done yo...

  Disoriented Di...
09/10/08 (12:02 AM) 
Dang Right...throw it out and get a new carton...Unless you want CHEESE!....loved the metaphor!

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