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"Space"
  by Angel


Space -

granted, I
said I’d give you that
but it leaves so very little room
for compromise –

don’t you think…?

Is it just me, or are we
suffering
at the hands of
trying
new things

Experimenting

With
time apart
hoping that in time, time
will drive closer two hearts

Foolishly, it seems,
we’ve stepped out unprotected
in bad weather
thinking good intentions
are all that’s needed
to face the
elements

Promises made
I’m watching evaporate
like mist
before these cold lips
your kiss
used to keep warm

Baby, something seems to have
gone terribly wrong

Too much space
left opportunities
to waste
precious time

Try to see this thing
through these
eyes of
mine

My love, love
won’t let me wait
this time

I can’t just sit
and let the moment
pass us by

We’ve got nothing but
time, space,
and opportunity

now

Why can’t we
for once
do with it
the right thing?


If You Love Me - Mint Condition

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Date Submitted: Aug 15, 2008 (12:23 AM)
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  Insatiable.ves...
09/05/08 (07:48 PM) 
*sigh* seems like i'm being led to the pieces that speak so many volumes to my personal situation at hand... I thank u for putting into words my hearts turmoil... very well scribed

  leezymleezy
08/19/08 (04:45 PM) 
a very nice write yet again....I really love your style...Its inspirational to me

  Jamillah
08/18/08 (02:31 AM) 
the devil IS a liar lol.... time and space.. apart.. sounds like such a good idea.. but it sure seems like it do more harm then good (poor grammar intentional :) Then again... if we drift apart.. perhaps that's the best thing.. the natural order of things.. so to speak... it's just accepting that reality that is, of course, very hard to do... great piece.. excellently executed.. as expected... i love the yearning evident in your words...

  mindigoblue
08/15/08 (02:04 AM) 
I felt this. I can see how this can happen so easily ina relationship. Somehow what is thought to be for the good of the relationship turns out to be to it's detriment. Space can sometimes put a couple into a rut interupting the bond and halting the building process that should be done together. This thought was delivered wonderfully.

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