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"Slow Jamz Poetik Freestyle Part III"
  by Nino-G


COME CLOSE TO ME, girl. Lay your head on my shoulder as we both think back on our first days. Of course, I know you remember when we was JUST KICKIN' IT as close friends. After a while, though, I was really feelin' you...DIGGIN' ON YOU as TLC woulda said. And me being the person that I am, I decided to let you know that. It's no use writing a FOUR PAGE LETTER if your feelings are real, ya dig? When you told me you felt the same way, I couldn't help but to smile big and embrace you so close to me. And after our first kiss...MY, MY, MY...those were some of the best moments we had, hearing you SAY YES like Floetry...U ALREADY KNOW. Everytime we'd kick it together, the first thing you would say when you'd approach me was "HEY, LOVER". You still do that too...and it still makes me smile everytime, just like when I call you SHAWTY. You know we alwayz make it DO WHAT IT DO behind closed doors as well, but it's different in a couple of ways, of course. I alwayz seem to BLOW YA MIND when MY BODY moves against YOUR BODY, and I get you to the point where you pull me in close and whisper in my ear, "O, BABY I'M YOURS". I think that somehow, that became our rules of the BED. Remember when I flipped the script and decided to CATER 2 U? You didn't know what to do because I took care of everything, but you loved every moment of it. To me, you're ONE IN A MILLION and there's NOBODY like you. I know that sometimes relationships get WEAK, but we got a strong one, no doubt. I tell you all the time that YOU DON'T HAVE TO WORRY about anything, BABY. It's gonna get COMPLICATED sometimes, but we alwayz seem to MAKE IT LIKE IT WAS before, or even better. I alwayz hope that you DONT TAKE YOUR LOVE AWAY, but at the same time, with some matters, I LEAVE IT ALL UP TO YOU. But I just wanna let you know that you complete my CIRCLE, you are my center that makes me whole...you MAKE ME BETTER. This how we both feel about each other, and the love that we share...let's MAKE IT LAST FOREVER...UNTIL THE END OF TIME. I LOVE YOU.
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Date Submitted: Nov 11, 2007 (04:03 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/26/08 (09:19 AM)
Author: carla-dee
Poem Title: Music Melody

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comment icon  COMMENTS (80)
  Kenesu
10/02/08 (11:21 AM) 
Everybody else pretty much said it but this joint was hot. liked how you used the song titles to describe ya love. dope shit.

  TonySouthern
07/22/08 (10:34 PM) 
This joint was well put together Nino. You on point with ya work mi spitta. Tight work no doubt. One love fam

  MizzTeaBaby
07/21/08 (11:59 PM) 
Very nice!!! A beautiful display of the epitomy of the meaning of the word......Love!!!! Perfectly ctergorized!! Ten StarZz all Day. One Love, MTB

  daidai_dts4l
07/10/08 (04:56 PM) 
damn mayne dis was on point..u did ur thing yet again..10starz

  KiNg-Go0B3r
06/30/08 (04:18 PM) 
word play and everything was straight on point ya diig fire bruh 10 starz

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