GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Forum
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow Arcane's PREVIOUS POEM Arcane's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"Slithering Serpent"
  by Arcane


Slithering serpent
Smothering --creeping on prey
For filling his greed

Upon you he’ll feed
Self- adoring fucking dark beast
Beware when he speaks

Trailing with poison
He’ll revive your hidden hate
Whispering dryness

With a silver speech
Awakening desire and hope
With faded patterns

{{Empty Speech}}

© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2008 (03:34 PM)
search icon
Viewed: 83 times
user icon
Rating: Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 (208 Points)
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 5 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
 
key Log In to rate this poem or add it to your favorites.
 



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  poetriboi
11/24/08 (01:29 PM) 
you deserve respect on this, this was highly professional with format and attitude

  11th Wonduh
11/21/08 (12:26 PM) 
dark & evil, the interpretive meaning w/ the picture is just as strong as the write. speaking of which, i got the sense that this was inferring to a dude who plays w/ women's emotions, hence the serpent. anyway. a damn good piece

  Brokenvegtable
11/04/08 (05:42 PM) 
i have written to boris and julie before and i always love what comes out of looking at thier artwork. and this is a great capture of this picture although you may of written this before getting the picture but either way its a great inclusion to this poem. each word of this had a great meaning to it and the stances were so perfectly lined up and what a story was told, although i dont find this poem very dark as more of a natural pleasure that might not be seen as acceptable so in turn it takes ...
[+]more

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
11/04/08 (12:30 PM) 
dam!

  Bestever
11/04/08 (10:52 AM) 
this pic is great mama to go with the write... that pic can be vise-versa as well too:) Lol

Page(s): 1  2  3  4 
key Log In to rate or comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow Arcane's PREVIOUS POEM Arcane's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy