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"Shed That Layer my Brotha!"
  by Abz Bunny


the layers of a hurt black man...

the first layer is a layer of disguise
it was created as a defense mechanism
it filled with
cockiness
roughness
rudeness
selfishness
a need to be flashy
it is a visage not the true self
but rather the self, he thinks people want him to be
used to block out in emotional hurt that my come his way


Shed that layer brotha!


the second layer is a layer of insecurities
a layer created from negative surroundings
being told he could not amount to anything
heart break
let downs
failure
mistakes
this layer is thick
it comes from years and years of pain

Shed that layer brotha!


the last and inner layer and the most important
its a layer that has been instilled in him
a layer that has been passed on from generation to generation
its a layer of strength and purpose
it is the same layer that has helped fight oppression
it is the same layer that slaves used to get through the day
the same layer that was used to build pyraminds
they say that life is the survivial of the fittest
and he's surviving so you know he is hella strong!

If only he would...

SHOW this layer my Brotha!
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Date Submitted: Jun 30, 2008 (05:13 PM)
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  Tavi_The_Sensu...
08/07/08 (03:54 PM) 
Great poem and so true, the layers of a black man! Sadly, now a days those layers have been blurred, and the last doesnt exist in some of our younger brothers! They havent been instilled with that morality, or strength that shouldve been passed from lifetime to lifestime, from grandfather to grandson, from grandson to son, from son to daughter! But i agree whole heartedly that many black men have layers they are afraid to peel away! The media stereotype, makes many think thats who they are su...
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  Quite
07/23/08 (01:22 PM) 
I liked this ma u made some real good points

  NINO-G
07/17/08 (04:50 AM) 
*Stands up and applauds* Well said, my sistah! Could NOT have been said any better...this is goin' down as a favorite

  PanthaG
07/14/08 (07:47 PM) 
this is such a beautiful poem...full of inspiration... :)

  2sincere
07/06/08 (06:00 PM) 
I like this one... it's deep! That inspires me to write

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