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"She Got A Hold On Me..."
  by Jesz
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Scurry Goat by Blakfiya


*creative challenge*

Lost and cold and alone in the world
didnt have much to show for jus bein nice
stopping at every other rest stop with only enough money for rice
the winding roads get rockier and so does my mind
having nothin to look foward to..theres nothin left to find
am i being taunted by all of the spiritual enemies i may have?
gettin me back for all the times i ran from them in the past
hitchhiking thru my thoughts..there stands this voluptuously breasted woman
witha slim waist and a bald kitty
using her eyes as claws and drawing me deeper into her presence
and as my body floats closer to this female with porn star traits
my heart beats the instrumental of "in love witha stripper"
the walls around it gettin more and more dense
i want this gravitational pull to jus speed up so i can be with her
but it seems the closer i think i get..the more she jus becomes a blur
i can hear her sweet words..they sound so close..all up on my ear drums
tryin my hardest not to bite my lip..but i eventually succumb
jus this womans essence has got me in some psychological trance
and i feel like that soldier in my trench waiting to advance
but i cant
i have no control
i have to hitchhike at her command
i have to move when she wants me to move
not even payin attention to the "woman" that was recently shaved
all im focused on is when shes gonna let me be saved
im jus dangling like the lifeless body that i am
is there anything left of me?
is there anything worth hitchhiking for?
i dont want to kno the answer anymore
so imma jus continue to let her eyes sink into me
imma let her let them take me wherever she wants me to be
no more trekking thru this mind of mine alone
she jus might be the path i need to follow to get back home

*Hitchhikers and BaldHead Porn Stars*
not funny

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Date Submitted: Nov 14, 2008 (06:33 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/15/08 (05:03 PM)
Author: MAVRICK
Poem Title: How Long Can You Hid...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (10)
  Arcane
11/20/08 (12:51 PM) 
Wow.. I'm very impress.. You did a really good job on this one..It's amazing how we can get a subject and everyone can come up with a different outlook.. Nicely penned..

  .Always.Catali...
11/17/08 (06:26 PM) 
like that is crazy what you flipped it into....much respect...my personal fav of all of them so far...

  Soul Lyrikal
11/17/08 (06:08 PM) 
well done...very descriptive and in the realm of surr-reality....

  Tpoet
11/16/08 (10:44 AM) 
Nicely Done..u layed this down

  MR. BYRD
11/16/08 (09:11 AM) 
damn...um, there are a lot of lines on here i could quote, but I love the entire write...great job poet....keep pushing that pen 10 from B-Y

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